
8/31/2011 c4 Souls Luva
Plz update soon,i'm loving this storyso far
Plz update soon,i'm loving this storyso far
8/26/2011 c2
1lnnocent Demon
I loved the sentence at the end of chapter 1! MAde me want to keep reading.
This story is awesome! I suggest you write longer chapters maybe, but still awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I loved the sentence at the end of chapter 1! MAde me want to keep reading.
This story is awesome! I suggest you write longer chapters maybe, but still awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter!
8/25/2011 c2 lbell107
This is a wonderful story keep writing... Could you please try to make your chapters longer it would be nice... The longer the chapters the better! :) Thx so much for writing
This is a wonderful story keep writing... Could you please try to make your chapters longer it would be nice... The longer the chapters the better! :) Thx so much for writing
8/25/2011 c2 lbell107
This is a wonderful story keep writing... Could you please try to make your chapters longer it would be nice... The longer the chapters the better! :) Thx so much for writing
This is a wonderful story keep writing... Could you please try to make your chapters longer it would be nice... The longer the chapters the better! :) Thx so much for writing