9/24/2012 c4 Ryu Uchiha
Nice fic plz update soon
Nice fic plz update soon
9/14/2011 c2 Kishi shirei-kan
I find this story really interesting. The plot twist kind-of thing by now throwing Sakura in there will make things more interesting I think. One suggestion I could make is to use dictionary.com...in a couple instances you used mussel (any bivalve mollusk) when it should be muscle (a tissue composed of cells or fibers, the contraction of which produces movement in the body).
I find this story really interesting. The plot twist kind-of thing by now throwing Sakura in there will make things more interesting I think. One suggestion I could make is to use dictionary.com...in a couple instances you used mussel (any bivalve mollusk) when it should be muscle (a tissue composed of cells or fibers, the contraction of which produces movement in the body).
9/12/2011 c2 DragonU496
I'm actually liking this story so far. Sure a few spelling errors here and there but I still like it. Keep up the good work
I'm actually liking this story so far. Sure a few spelling errors here and there but I still like it. Keep up the good work