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8/29/2011 c1 7Lizzie Beans
Finally. FINALLY. A decent oneshot. Hard to come across it these days.

It never occurred to me that Yaya and Kairi were the reporters. XD I loved the plot. And how Rima and Nagi flirted with each other.

I would glomp you for this oneshot if I didn't have a cold.

Keep it up, yes? :D

♥ Lizzie :)
8/27/2011 c1 rinaslily
OH MY GOSH. This was so hilarious! I was smiling throughout the whole story. I liked the way Yaya was narrating. Gah, so funny! Great fic!
8/27/2011 c1 11Chocolate covered charas
XD That's so cute and origanal. And deadly. XD I can't wait to read any other of your storys!
8/27/2011 c1 BunnyQueenLivesForever
I can`t stop LOLing!:D

GREAT JOB

☺☻♥
8/27/2011 c1 6sunburnesd
Haha i like the way it's set up
8/26/2011 c1 5Rikanchuu
... I died.

Well, literally. I stood there reading it and smiling like an idiot. Damn, way to make my morning here, I love it! XD

And I don't think you made them OOC at all. In fact, I think Yaya's just perfectly fine, since I can imagine her acting all professional-reporter-on-duty when she's not supposed to be. I love how Kairi's her cameraman! For Nagihiko and Rima... GDI, I squealed like a piggy fangirl I am when I read the kiss part. And then there's everyone commenting about them before the whole thing starts... LMAO xD

Oh, Nagihiko, you'll get her soon. And mate with her- *shot* =w=)b

This is so original for the first story you wrote. Great job! ^^

Thanks for making my morning, and keep up the good work! :D

- Rikan
8/26/2011 c1 6MintCookieMonsterr
I laughed like crazy!
8/26/2011 c1 16TheSleepingNeko
My sister and I had a ball reading this together! Great job!
8/26/2011 c1 Guest
So funny! I love Utau! She was all like make out already! And send me the video! XP
8/26/2011 c1 41Fading to Black
Wow. Just wow. That was AMAZING! It's well-written, and I think you kept them mostly in character, which is good. I can't wait to see more of you!
8/26/2011 c1 21KidTantei
I absolutely LOVE this! I love the idea of comparing Rima and Nagi to 'creatures' in the wild, although I don't think they would like that... xD I love Yaya's narrations. They were REALLY well done, and it made this story so professional. I love the opinions in the beginning, especially Nikaidou's. His last sentence was epic. xD

This was a very entertaining story, and definitely well-written. Great job on your first fic! :D
8/26/2011 c1 monique
funny i can totally see yaya doing that awsome i wish they had got together
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