for Croquet and Kisses11/1/2014 c1 Guest
loved it
loved it
4/8/2013 c1 
7Hanable-13
very interesting... might have been better as a multi chapter... and if i have ur permission i might try it but a damn fine story any way. damn fine.
H :)
7Hanable-13very interesting... might have been better as a multi chapter... and if i have ur permission i might try it but a damn fine story any way. damn fine.
H :)
9/20/2012 c1 Guest
I wanted to like this story...but its got such a rapey vibe I can't stand to read the rest of it. And the fact that Hermione is turned on by that rapey vibe grosses me out more.
I wanted to like this story...but its got such a rapey vibe I can't stand to read the rest of it. And the fact that Hermione is turned on by that rapey vibe grosses me out more.
10/28/2011 c1 PersonWhoIsInLoveWithThisFic
Hi. I love this. It's literally brilliant. Please, for the sake of all your readers out there, PLEASE continue it? Even if it's just a little bit? (Teeny thing, when Hermione is talking to Adrian, and says 'you wish I was jealous?', it really should be 'You wish I were jealous?'. Sorry. That's all. I'm a grammar nazi like that) Anyway, love it again, stay awesome and write MORE please :) xxx
Hi. I love this. It's literally brilliant. Please, for the sake of all your readers out there, PLEASE continue it? Even if it's just a little bit? (Teeny thing, when Hermione is talking to Adrian, and says 'you wish I was jealous?', it really should be 'You wish I were jealous?'. Sorry. That's all. I'm a grammar nazi like that) Anyway, love it again, stay awesome and write MORE please :) xxx
9/26/2011 c1 17Ladii Emelia
I'm not a fan of Hermione/Lucius, but this was an interesting plot and I enjoyed reading it.
17Ladii EmeliaI'm not a fan of Hermione/Lucius, but this was an interesting plot and I enjoyed reading it.
9/6/2011 c1 jessi
Oh come on chap this! Its a amazing story
Oh come on chap this! Its a amazing story
8/29/2011 c1 34DressagePunk
This story was so original, and interesting, even if it was smutty I loved the plot behind it and you did a wonderful job making the characters believable.
34DressagePunkThis story was so original, and interesting, even if it was smutty I loved the plot behind it and you did a wonderful job making the characters believable.