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11/12/2012 c7 wotumba1
great story!
7/29/2012 c7 Guest
Trite and cardboard - these stick figures are NOTHING like the characters on the show.
7/10/2012 c7 46pechika
Liked the way u wrapped it up. Whump for the boys was a bonus
1/20/2012 c6 3WynonaRose
Very interesting. And funny. Mozzie is such a smart guy then he says the strangest things!

You have captured the characters very well. Excellent job.

Keep going. I can't wait to see what happens when Neal shows up at peter's meet.
1/17/2012 c6 17JeanneZ84
Well,there plan will be in action soon.

I can hardly wait for tonights show.Im so EXCITED!

1/17/2012 c6 4canadianscanget
Some really nice lines through out. Love what Mozzie thinks the Lights are - the green really is eerie when it's pulsating.

"Has anyone ever told you you're smarter than you look, Suit! I'm impressed,...

"...It's pathetic really, seeing you crawl like this. I had expected a big fight, a big con. Something worthy of the great Neal Caffrey. I must say, I think you're giving up way too easily. Maybe it's because your handler is finally seeing the real you and he's sick of playing your games as well."
1/14/2012 c5 caffrey girl
I highly doubt that Peter would menace Neal in the care of a person he just found on the road and expect him not to run, besides that your story is absolutely great and hilarious. Mozzie's dialogues are perfect. Looking forward to your update
1/14/2012 c5 17JeanneZ84
Well,Neal is only trying to rescue Elizabeth,and that is a great thing.

1/8/2012 c4 chgkfdgfgfkjghjfy
Aww poor Neal and poor Peter. Love mozzie in this chapter.
1/8/2012 c4 JeanneZ84

1/8/2012 c3 JeanneZ84
I know I shouldnt be laughing at this so much,because its a serious situation,but I can't help it.

1/8/2012 c2 JeanneZ84
Like the story but I feel sorry for Neal.

1/8/2012 c1 JeanneZ84
Oh My God!

Neal has to be so worried.

1/8/2012 c1 18aliceann
Good job. I have to say I didn't see that reaction(laughter) coming from Neal in this situation, maybe the pressure is literally going to his head. That said, I'm interested to see where you go. Thanks for sharing.
1/8/2012 c4 4canadianscanget
Little green men! Snowflakes! David!

Anyone reading your reviews will say, "Say what?"

Heh, they are all so much fun mixed in with the seriousness of it all. G
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