for Chameleon12/27/2023 c1 Guest
Would love anymore I’ve read this a couple times over the years hopeing for more
Would love anymore I’ve read this a couple times over the years hopeing for more
11/11/2014 c4 Guest
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Please update!
10/20/2014 c4 I heart vamps
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1/20/2014 c4 I heart vamps
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7/17/2013 c4 Booklver1
Hey just found your story. I really like it. I don't know if u'll ever really see this, but I hope u update soon! I like the twist u added with how not only does Bella's power allow her to disappear, but people forget that she was even there. Its really cool, but i can't help but say POOR BELLA! I like the way you've written the story so far, and would like to see more for this story…. i'll be looking for updates! :) :) :) :) :) :)
Hey just found your story. I really like it. I don't know if u'll ever really see this, but I hope u update soon! I like the twist u added with how not only does Bella's power allow her to disappear, but people forget that she was even there. Its really cool, but i can't help but say POOR BELLA! I like the way you've written the story so far, and would like to see more for this story…. i'll be looking for updates! :) :) :) :) :) :)
1/16/2013 c4 ERHMAGERD
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M HOOKED AAAARRRGGGHHHH
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M HOOKED AAAARRRGGGHHHH
10/17/2012 c4 Guest
Please update
Please update
7/9/2012 c4 
1Faithindestiny
I love this story so far. Bella's powers are really unique and interesting. They make the story more intriguing and really shows a lot about Bella's character while making you sympathise with her. I think you have captured Bella and the rest very well. I have always enjoyed the stories set in the newborn wars (especially with Jasper and Bella stories) and your is not exception even though you didn't go into detail about the conditions. Your skimming of the conditions is done well though with the little details that gives insight to the brutality of the environment. Anyway, poor bella. Great chapter and I hope you update soon.
1FaithindestinyI love this story so far. Bella's powers are really unique and interesting. They make the story more intriguing and really shows a lot about Bella's character while making you sympathise with her. I think you have captured Bella and the rest very well. I have always enjoyed the stories set in the newborn wars (especially with Jasper and Bella stories) and your is not exception even though you didn't go into detail about the conditions. Your skimming of the conditions is done well though with the little details that gives insight to the brutality of the environment. Anyway, poor bella. Great chapter and I hope you update soon.
7/9/2012 c3 lalalajazzi
I like the story just started reading it today(:
the storyline is amazing and has a lot of potential for greatness and the lenghty chapters are definitely a bonus. But from the reviews I see you don't update all that often:( I usually prefer to read stories that are finished or have a lot of chapters, or I know the author updates frequently. But in your case that doesn't seem to be the case:/ long updates in between chapter leave time for people to forget ya know? So, nore than likly I look up this story by the end of the year so there hoepfully be more than just one or two chapters to read. Its such a tease to the readers :( good luck on the story though
I like the story just started reading it today(:
the storyline is amazing and has a lot of potential for greatness and the lenghty chapters are definitely a bonus. But from the reviews I see you don't update all that often:( I usually prefer to read stories that are finished or have a lot of chapters, or I know the author updates frequently. But in your case that doesn't seem to be the case:/ long updates in between chapter leave time for people to forget ya know? So, nore than likly I look up this story by the end of the year so there hoepfully be more than just one or two chapters to read. Its such a tease to the readers :( good luck on the story though
7/9/2012 c4 NatalieLynn
A very exciting chapter! The ending was very sad though. I'm anxious to find out what happens next!
A very exciting chapter! The ending was very sad though. I'm anxious to find out what happens next!