for Idle Conversation5/16/2016 c2 Guest
Oh I love that ! Great job !
Oh I love that ! Great job !
3/8/2014 c2 
17ILikeShorts
Still loving the banter in this. All Lance and Karen ever seem to do is get on each other's nerves, and it's awesome.
Their opinions of the other elites are hilarious. And "has a Sudowoodo up his ass" is quite possibly the best real-world-turned-Pokémon-world expression I've ever heard in my life. Like, ever. XD
17ILikeShortsStill loving the banter in this. All Lance and Karen ever seem to do is get on each other's nerves, and it's awesome.
Their opinions of the other elites are hilarious. And "has a Sudowoodo up his ass" is quite possibly the best real-world-turned-Pokémon-world expression I've ever heard in my life. Like, ever. XD
12/18/2012 c1 1Limplict
AWWWWWWWWW I love this! The dialogue's hilarious, and your characterisations of them are spot on :) Hope you write more stories like this! Our favourite dragon master's lacking good stories to read :(
1LimplictAWWWWWWWWW I love this! The dialogue's hilarious, and your characterisations of them are spot on :) Hope you write more stories like this! Our favourite dragon master's lacking good stories to read :(
5/9/2012 c1 14Kaki-kun
Very cute, it really shows the kind of personality you interpret them both being, and I tend to agree! I think the back and forth banter could be improved if there was more to it then the dialog itself- where they motioning any? Any certain inflection in their voice? These things could help it a little, but again, I did like this overall. 3
14Kaki-kunVery cute, it really shows the kind of personality you interpret them both being, and I tend to agree! I think the back and forth banter could be improved if there was more to it then the dialog itself- where they motioning any? Any certain inflection in their voice? These things could help it a little, but again, I did like this overall. 3
3/17/2012 c1 17ILikeShorts
Great job with the banter... there were some amazing lines in there. XD Some of my favorites:
-"Karen, how many times have I told you the way you dress is not appropriate for a member of the Elite Four?"
-"You will not do anything crazy. You will not invite the gym leaders here for a party, nor will you pick on Will's Pokémon."
-"Didn't we make a rule you couldn't bring your Pokémon into our arguments?"
-"Personally, I love devoted and mindless fans. They're kind of like personal slaves."
-"Don't pretend you have a fashion sense, Lance, because you don't."
17ILikeShortsGreat job with the banter... there were some amazing lines in there. XD Some of my favorites:
-"Karen, how many times have I told you the way you dress is not appropriate for a member of the Elite Four?"
-"You will not do anything crazy. You will not invite the gym leaders here for a party, nor will you pick on Will's Pokémon."
-"Didn't we make a rule you couldn't bring your Pokémon into our arguments?"
-"Personally, I love devoted and mindless fans. They're kind of like personal slaves."
-"Don't pretend you have a fashion sense, Lance, because you don't."
9/10/2011 c1 1FreezyIce
"Hide in the shadows, naked and scare the challengers." HAHAHA, oh, wow that was freaking funny xD. Best story about Karen. :P
1FreezyIce"Hide in the shadows, naked and scare the challengers." HAHAHA, oh, wow that was freaking funny xD. Best story about Karen. :P
9/4/2011 c1 13Master Bleach
How does this only have 1 review so far!
This is very well written and done.
The characterization was near flawless, very impressive and very enjoyable to read!
13Master BleachHow does this only have 1 review so far!
This is very well written and done.
The characterization was near flawless, very impressive and very enjoyable to read!