for Mouse2/22/2012 c13 
9thecoolauthorwithstory
AHYHHHH! STUPID KARIN! WHY IS SHE HERE? And yeah true the story is getting darker :/ but i felt like Tenten is the victim of this...bullying thing?
Anyway so just want to say-thanks for the update after a long time :) i sure hope nothing would happen to tenten. We already had enough karin-bullying-sakura thingy and we don't need it to get to Tenten soon. Cuz she an awesome female and doesn't deserved to be weak.
Kay so even if she get bully by karin-meanie. Then i know ALMOST everyone will root for Tenten. (Except for some karin fans)
9thecoolauthorwithstoryAHYHHHH! STUPID KARIN! WHY IS SHE HERE? And yeah true the story is getting darker :/ but i felt like Tenten is the victim of this...bullying thing?
Anyway so just want to say-thanks for the update after a long time :) i sure hope nothing would happen to tenten. We already had enough karin-bullying-sakura thingy and we don't need it to get to Tenten soon. Cuz she an awesome female and doesn't deserved to be weak.
Kay so even if she get bully by karin-meanie. Then i know ALMOST everyone will root for Tenten. (Except for some karin fans)
2/20/2012 c13 DarkAnonymous324
I hope the next chapter will be longer. Great work.
I really hope things will get better for tenten :(
I hope the next chapter will be longer. Great work.
I really hope things will get better for tenten :(
1/30/2012 c12 Omn
I love Lee so much! He's the best friend that everyone wants to have. If there were more people like him, the world would be so much better.
I wonder what Neji will do? I also wonder what Lee was doing before the dance.
Please update soon!
I love Lee so much! He's the best friend that everyone wants to have. If there were more people like him, the world would be so much better.
I wonder what Neji will do? I also wonder what Lee was doing before the dance.
Please update soon!
1/24/2012 c12 9thecoolauthorwithstory
Aahhhhh cute chapter :3 I suggest tenten to revenge against those b*****
Update soon
9thecoolauthorwithstoryAahhhhh cute chapter :3 I suggest tenten to revenge against those b*****
Update soon
1/24/2012 c12 DarkAnonymous324
I feel so bad for her. I hope neji will talk to her in the next chapter.
I feel so bad for her. I hope neji will talk to her in the next chapter.
1/16/2012 c11 Omn
Poor Tenten! I feel so sorry for her. But I wonder why Lee was going to be late? I wonder what Neji is going to do next? Update soon! All these questions are killing me!
Poor Tenten! I feel so sorry for her. But I wonder why Lee was going to be late? I wonder what Neji is going to do next? Update soon! All these questions are killing me!
1/13/2012 c11 thecoolauthorwithstory
poor tennie :'( that was real disaster I wonder if lee would accept the fact that neji broke her heart or something? :D And then lee would say to neji Don't ever come near her again! And then jealousy would start!
Oooooooh :-) heeeeeheeee
Ok mayb it wasn't like that but I though it would b cute- Update spoon!
poor tennie :'( that was real disaster I wonder if lee would accept the fact that neji broke her heart or something? :D And then lee would say to neji Don't ever come near her again! And then jealousy would start!
Oooooooh :-) heeeeeheeee
Ok mayb it wasn't like that but I though it would b cute- Update spoon!
1/13/2012 c10 thecoolauthorwithstory
Uh-oh oh great one of those Karin revenge thing again
-.-
Aw man I had a feeling nejiten gonna float away soon ):
Uh-oh oh great one of those Karin revenge thing again
-.-
Aw man I had a feeling nejiten gonna float away soon ):
1/13/2012 c9 thecoolauthorwithstory
Why do we have so much Karin these days? :/ Almost in every stories
Although she played good as a mean girl XDDD
Why do we have so much Karin these days? :/ Almost in every stories
Although she played good as a mean girl XDDD
1/13/2012 c8 thecoolauthorwithstory
I'm soooo glad that this is not one of those stories where they always put neji being a jerk and a playboy and how they also put tenten boylish and tomboy,then they always hate each other. I read tons of that so I got tired of it and look for a new subject to read :-)
I'm soooo glad that this is not one of those stories where they always put neji being a jerk and a playboy and how they also put tenten boylish and tomboy,then they always hate each other. I read tons of that so I got tired of it and look for a new subject to read :-)
1/13/2012 c7 thecoolauthorwithstory
Little mouse tenten is sooo cute ^_^ I wonder if lee likes her too?
Little mouse tenten is sooo cute ^_^ I wonder if lee likes her too?
1/13/2012 c6 thecoolauthorwithstory
Tentsn oocness is what making this story cooler ya know XDDD she just sound cute in this story for some reason ^_^ wonder what neji will think...
Tentsn oocness is what making this story cooler ya know XDDD she just sound cute in this story for some reason ^_^ wonder what neji will think...
1/12/2012 c4 thecoolauthorwithstory
Sorry i know that ur confused on the last review but it was me,i was on my friends account so i dint know i wasn't on this account XDDD yea sorry
Sorry i know that ur confused on the last review but it was me,i was on my friends account so i dint know i wasn't on this account XDDD yea sorry