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7/17/2014 c1 Johnsoline
Heheh, Star Trek. Wonderful.
12/22/2012 c1 Aleu15
i really liked it LOL drunk Sarafina
7/23/2012 c1 1Faithios
Interesting story but I'm not quite sure I understood the thing about the characters having last names.

But hey, I like the idea of having background music while we read the story! ;)
12/23/2011 c5 178Lavenderpaw
where is kovu?
12/23/2011 c4 Lavenderpaw
not bad, remember periods and "

aww, Sarabi died. :(
12/23/2011 c3 Lavenderpaw
divorce boo! wedding yay!

remember to put your italics " and your dialogue correctly. space them out and everything. :)
12/23/2011 c2 Lavenderpaw
Kula and Kopa huh?
12/23/2011 c1 Lavenderpaw
I love the hyenas.
11/15/2011 c1 LionHeart53
Hmmm... I like it it's interesting. I wonder what Scar has planned?
10/11/2011 c5 64BroadwayFanGirl91
Guess who made time to read your second book? *points two thumbs* This girl! Ha ha!

Um, yeah... where's Kopa? O.O I'm so mad that Scar killed Sarabi. Grrrr...

I got to ask, who the heck is Kopa? I know he's Simba's son in here, but I've seen him in other books. I thought Kiara was his first born? Am I missing something? lol. I must be out of the lion king loop or something... XD
10/8/2011 c1 BroadwayFanGirl91
Hi it's me. I'm on my iPod and it won't let me login.

Anyway i disabled my p.m because I thought I never needed it. I did enable it today just in case though. So it is now enabled. ;)

Good first chapter for this story btw... Will read more later.
10/4/2011 c5 alex crowley
I have an aplogy to make you know me as 5. not true my real name is Alex croweley I live at a homeless shelter at 317 W 45th St, New York, NY I have been runing on drugs for the last 3 years and going to intenet cafee's on these drugs. I am sorry but I must confess now. sorry david
9/13/2011 c5 5193
Really like your creativity and your getting better, spelling wise and writing wise. Although I'm not exactly a very credible person on that front! But you do need to work a little on your flow, other than that,

JOB WELL DONE!
9/12/2011 c5 1chaosblast321
Hey sorry i just now got around ta reading this, um i agree with Brasta on the hints and tips, i might wanna add character development to that list, but possibly not, great story ill have ta wait till the next one.

To 5: WHO ARE YOU! really get a freaking account so we can explain to you what's going on! Also back off, so what if he likes old music and Star Trek, they had PLOT something you obviously cant handle because you dont have an account! Also please if you are here on this website jsut to be overcritical to TLK fanfictioner's dont its not exactly a good thing to have random people across the world mad at you especially i fthat some one is me!

Well i guess that sums up[ ma stand on things, ill catch ya later Johnny and good luck on ya next story! I fya ever need any help ma inbox is open!
9/7/2011 c5 Kvin125
great book! ends in a cliffhangar and leaves u wondering! keep writing! cant wait until the next book!

to 5,

if u dont like it, STOP READING! its f***ing fan-fiction, y would u harass someone on FAN-FICTION? the review option wasnt made to completely insult someone! im amazed at how stupid people can be.

-Reish
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