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9/1/2011 c1 6miluvrox
Oh I love this and I especially like the little italics sentences. They basically summarize the section above it and makes the whole story look better. And I LOVE Petunia. She's so understated and I really love when people write stuff about her physce and her childhood. Really, I don't know why everyone think Lily was this perfect nice little sister.
9/1/2011 c1 Guest
I really, really like this. Petunia is perfect - the balance between her jealousy and her love for Lily is really nice, and I love the repetitiveness of the italicised parts.

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