for Journey of a Demigod8/1/2012 c6 gothchicnumba1
hehe. didnt think you would use Angel. Doing great! i don't know if she is mine or yours since we were thinking and made her up at a random time... Keep it up!
hehe. didnt think you would use Angel. Doing great! i don't know if she is mine or yours since we were thinking and made her up at a random time... Keep it up!
7/29/2012 c5 POTTERHEAD
KEEP GOING! I WANNA FIND OUT WHO VIOLETS MUM/DAD IS! I have a feeling that Alex's dad is Posiedon. Anyways. Please keep going!
KEEP GOING! I WANNA FIND OUT WHO VIOLETS MUM/DAD IS! I have a feeling that Alex's dad is Posiedon. Anyways. Please keep going!
5/29/2012 c4 
2greystarz18
I will "gor" read the Hunger Games again, ha. Well, after reading all of the updated versions of the chapters, I must say I am so impressed! The story was good before, but now it is much better! I really enjoyed re-reading it. Also, thank you for all the shout outs, it means much! -But I have to admit that your writting has increased in skill a lot. I love this story.. a lot. And thank you for adding Clio. I love the scenes she is in. You make her shine like the stars and sun! (Haha, pun!)
Great story! Oh.. and by the way, you have in chapter two "Lydia". I think you forgot to change that one. Just helping a brother out. Well talk to me sometimes! Happy summer!
2greystarz18I will "gor" read the Hunger Games again, ha. Well, after reading all of the updated versions of the chapters, I must say I am so impressed! The story was good before, but now it is much better! I really enjoyed re-reading it. Also, thank you for all the shout outs, it means much! -But I have to admit that your writting has increased in skill a lot. I love this story.. a lot. And thank you for adding Clio. I love the scenes she is in. You make her shine like the stars and sun! (Haha, pun!)
Great story! Oh.. and by the way, you have in chapter two "Lydia". I think you forgot to change that one. Just helping a brother out. Well talk to me sometimes! Happy summer!
4/8/2012 c5 gothchicnumba1
another great chappie. lol they thought she was sleeping. keep updating. oh i got Evanescence's Fallen and I'm listening to it right now. Maybe i can let u borrow it to replace ur scratched up music
another great chappie. lol they thought she was sleeping. keep updating. oh i got Evanescence's Fallen and I'm listening to it right now. Maybe i can let u borrow it to replace ur scratched up music
3/28/2012 c1 About the First Paragraph
At least hers school colors are something cool like a precious metal and not a hideous crimson red that makes everyone look like they weigh two tons. Please that girl does not have a thing to complain about.
At least hers school colors are something cool like a precious metal and not a hideous crimson red that makes everyone look like they weigh two tons. Please that girl does not have a thing to complain about.
2/20/2012 c3 gothchicnumba1
awesome, again! at least ms g is dead . ( ireally don't feel like proofreading my rtyping right now so sorry..) and lol unicorns...
awesome, again! at least ms g is dead . ( ireally don't feel like proofreading my rtyping right now so sorry..) and lol unicorns...
1/31/2012 c3 2greystarz18
Great chapter. And btw, clio is magic (she can add footnotes anytime) *evil smile*
Loved chapter though.
2greystarz18Great chapter. And btw, clio is magic (she can add footnotes anytime) *evil smile*
Loved chapter though.
1/29/2012 c2 gothchicnumba1
Great! cant wait until the next one comes. (wel i can just tell you in person ) B)
Great! cant wait until the next one comes. (wel i can just tell you in person ) B)
1/23/2012 c2 2Smile.4.U.2
This was also a good chapter. The part when Alex and Lydia ran up to find Clio again was confusing to me though. I couldn't tell if it was Clio on the ground or if she was okay. Just try to make it a little simpler. Make it clear who's talking and who's on the ground bleeding to death. :) Hope I helped!
2Smile.4.U.2This was also a good chapter. The part when Alex and Lydia ran up to find Clio again was confusing to me though. I couldn't tell if it was Clio on the ground or if she was okay. Just try to make it a little simpler. Make it clear who's talking and who's on the ground bleeding to death. :) Hope I helped!
1/23/2012 c1 Smile.4.U.2
This is a really good story. There's nice description, and a good story line. Alex's anger is very well thought out. Over all a great beginning!
This is a really good story. There's nice description, and a good story line. Alex's anger is very well thought out. Over all a great beginning!
10/19/2011 c2 2greystarz18
Great ch. though I already read it. I have to hand it to you, every one of your ch.s amazes me. You are a great writer and I am NOT joking. I will help next ch. if you are wondering, so talk to me later. Bye, and awesome ch. Fish.
2greystarz18Great ch. though I already read it. I have to hand it to you, every one of your ch.s amazes me. You are a great writer and I am NOT joking. I will help next ch. if you are wondering, so talk to me later. Bye, and awesome ch. Fish.
9/5/2011 c1 SilverSparksFly21
I really like this story! Plz keep on with it because its like got me addicted! Anyway, update ! 3
I really like this story! Plz keep on with it because its like got me addicted! Anyway, update ! 3