for Baseball and the Squint9/6/2011 c1 KittyOrens
Enjoyed this sweet, and very time appropriate story. Though if I owned Booth he'd be a SF Giants fan! grin
Enjoyed this sweet, and very time appropriate story. Though if I owned Booth he'd be a SF Giants fan! grin
9/2/2011 c1 
64nattylovesjordy
I was so excited when I saw this email! Basically, I loved everything. The whole difference in small things, like toothbrushes and detergent, was great. Definitely made me chuckle. Especially the "(they use tide)" part, haha. The whole idea of a summer of learning was nice.
Also, the last line. I always like a tie-in like that.
The glint in her eye? I write about that a lot! Or, at least I feel I do, haha. So I liked that.
The whole paragraph about her bending over and him knowing "trouble is brewing" MIGHT have been my favorite part. I'm unsure why, exactly, but it's true. I really like the way you described it/wrote it, for starters.
Great job! Woo-hoo!
Thanks.
64nattylovesjordyI was so excited when I saw this email! Basically, I loved everything. The whole difference in small things, like toothbrushes and detergent, was great. Definitely made me chuckle. Especially the "(they use tide)" part, haha. The whole idea of a summer of learning was nice.
Also, the last line. I always like a tie-in like that.
The glint in her eye? I write about that a lot! Or, at least I feel I do, haha. So I liked that.
The whole paragraph about her bending over and him knowing "trouble is brewing" MIGHT have been my favorite part. I'm unsure why, exactly, but it's true. I really like the way you described it/wrote it, for starters.
Great job! Woo-hoo!
Thanks.
9/2/2011 c1 mendenbar
Youngest son played baseball in HS and works for a Baseball Academy now. He also is an assistant coach at one of the local HSs. We don't care about baseball around here (much). Although, we do tend to keep track of the Red's. (They are just up the river.) And our local AAA team isn't too shabby either.
The story? Oh, yeah. Well, gotta agree with Booth on this one. Better than the Diamond Club.
Youngest son played baseball in HS and works for a Baseball Academy now. He also is an assistant coach at one of the local HSs. We don't care about baseball around here (much). Although, we do tend to keep track of the Red's. (They are just up the river.) And our local AAA team isn't too shabby either.
The story? Oh, yeah. Well, gotta agree with Booth on this one. Better than the Diamond Club.
9/2/2011 c1 18purple.bookworm.girl
Ah. Freaking. Dorable. I LOVE how you talked about their compromises because they're totally going to have to do that and this is just wonderful. Sooooo cute, I can totally imagine them having conversations like this ;D
18purple.bookworm.girlAh. Freaking. Dorable. I LOVE how you talked about their compromises because they're totally going to have to do that and this is just wonderful. Sooooo cute, I can totally imagine them having conversations like this ;D