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2Irina Hunter
Actually, maneki-neko means beckoning cat, and it's a symbol of good luck and prosperity. And Dai Shiro should be one word.
2Irina HunterActually, maneki-neko means beckoning cat, and it's a symbol of good luck and prosperity. And Dai Shiro should be one word.
3/2/2017 c21 Irina Hunter
13 plus 12 is 25, not 23. Also, there's no need to put a hyphen between the last names and the first names of those from Nihon Koku. I also recommend just using their first names. Also, having them say Prince William-sama is unnecessary. Just use one title or the other.
13 plus 12 is 25, not 23. Also, there's no need to put a hyphen between the last names and the first names of those from Nihon Koku. I also recommend just using their first names. Also, having them say Prince William-sama is unnecessary. Just use one title or the other.
11/19/2013 c27 6ElizabethAnneSoph
What a nice story, completely unbelievable but fantastic all on its own! Please do continue this story! And more about Eugene, Raspunzel, Rupert, Amanda and Catherine of Estrella and young Crown Prince William! William and Catherine is a completely cute couple! I can't wait to see how the King and Queen reactions more to Raspunzel! Fantastic, brilliant, amazing and so well written!
My deepest compliments on your story
6ElizabethAnneSophWhat a nice story, completely unbelievable but fantastic all on its own! Please do continue this story! And more about Eugene, Raspunzel, Rupert, Amanda and Catherine of Estrella and young Crown Prince William! William and Catherine is a completely cute couple! I can't wait to see how the King and Queen reactions more to Raspunzel! Fantastic, brilliant, amazing and so well written!
My deepest compliments on your story
8/14/2013 c27 41bStormhands
That was an exciting fight and quite the resolution.
That warning she gives comes off as so chilling. It is hard to comprehend a warning like that beforehand.
Well done.
41bStormhandsThat was an exciting fight and quite the resolution.
That warning she gives comes off as so chilling. It is hard to comprehend a warning like that beforehand.
Well done.
6/14/2013 c26 Lelo
Get back to rapunzel
Get back to rapunzel
6/6/2013 c26 bStormhands
Man, I wish your chapters were longer, they are awesome and I want more to chew on.
Man, I wish your chapters were longer, they are awesome and I want more to chew on.
8/10/2012 c23 bStormhands
You've got an awesome team there. Really awesome. Can't wait for the action.
You've got an awesome team there. Really awesome. Can't wait for the action.