
6/6/2024 c5 colbylast
Good riddance. Sakura was filler anyways. It'll be nice having someone useful along for the ride. Only concern is her being too useful and stealing Naruto's growth opportunities.
Good riddance. Sakura was filler anyways. It'll be nice having someone useful along for the ride. Only concern is her being too useful and stealing Naruto's growth opportunities.
5/31/2024 c41 Felon GT
I wish Kishimoto contacted and gave you the honors to do a reboot of the series and hopefully with your story being the parallel.
Similar to how Akira Toriyama recruited and made Toyotarō (who wrote Dragon Ball AF) his successor for the continuing series of DB.
I wish Kishimoto contacted and gave you the honors to do a reboot of the series and hopefully with your story being the parallel.
Similar to how Akira Toriyama recruited and made Toyotarō (who wrote Dragon Ball AF) his successor for the continuing series of DB.
5/31/2024 c21 Felon GT
In chapter 21. Is Naruto doing 2-way communication with the shadow clones once Shikako asked to get an update status of other teams? Since it’s not confirmed in either Naruto & Boruto…..or is there a plot hole that could be used.
It’s in the paragraph where Naruto makes a clone and waiting for clone to respond back for the update? Or am i misinterpreting. If it’s a fandom concept that cool. But if it’s a plot hole from canon concept that even better.
In chapter 21. Is Naruto doing 2-way communication with the shadow clones once Shikako asked to get an update status of other teams? Since it’s not confirmed in either Naruto & Boruto…..or is there a plot hole that could be used.
It’s in the paragraph where Naruto makes a clone and waiting for clone to respond back for the update? Or am i misinterpreting. If it’s a fandom concept that cool. But if it’s a plot hole from canon concept that even better.
5/30/2024 c12 haveyouconsiderednot
the other thing i appreciate about your style of fanfiction is that you take canon explanations, or implications, or realities of serial manga publishing, and try and logic out a reasonable in-universe explanation. ex: distinctive colorful individual outfits youth/civilian blending/distinct loud exterior style means you look like a whole new person with a diff set of clothes and henged hair). or why they don’t learn seemingly fundamental chakra skills in school. that kinda shit. being able to take a lot of the zero-thought-head-empty canon and twist it into something that Can make sense is a cool skill. also a fun thought exercise!
the other thing i appreciate about your style of fanfiction is that you take canon explanations, or implications, or realities of serial manga publishing, and try and logic out a reasonable in-universe explanation. ex: distinctive colorful individual outfits youth/civilian blending/distinct loud exterior style means you look like a whole new person with a diff set of clothes and henged hair). or why they don’t learn seemingly fundamental chakra skills in school. that kinda shit. being able to take a lot of the zero-thought-head-empty canon and twist it into something that Can make sense is a cool skill. also a fun thought exercise!
5/30/2024 c4 haveyouconsiderednot
i really appreciate the more balanced take on naruto’s neglect. like, it’s societal and for the most part not straightforward, yeah? still wrong but it feels more. rooted in human behavior and tendencies. not that the ubiquitous loud angry super active social exclusion from all sides doesn’t happen in real life but. idk it feels too easy. a case of fanon angst one-upmanship - the approach can be down well of course but the amount of research to make it effective and congruous usually isn’t done. this take feels more like a. hmm. useful social critique?better throughline to naruto-the-character? anyway! big fan!
i really appreciate the more balanced take on naruto’s neglect. like, it’s societal and for the most part not straightforward, yeah? still wrong but it feels more. rooted in human behavior and tendencies. not that the ubiquitous loud angry super active social exclusion from all sides doesn’t happen in real life but. idk it feels too easy. a case of fanon angst one-upmanship - the approach can be down well of course but the amount of research to make it effective and congruous usually isn’t done. this take feels more like a. hmm. useful social critique?better throughline to naruto-the-character? anyway! big fan!
5/30/2024 c1 haveyouconsiderednot
hey! just starting a reread and delving into all the oc tropes of early 10’s fandom is super fun and nostalgic!
hey! just starting a reread and delving into all the oc tropes of early 10’s fandom is super fun and nostalgic!
5/28/2024 c79 Dicloniuslord
Nah fuck that. She can be as petty as she wants. Its a CHAKRA CONTROL TEST SEAL and they act like she’s doing human experimentation and talking about her showing she’s “trustworthy”
Nah fuck that. She can be as petty as she wants. Its a CHAKRA CONTROL TEST SEAL and they act like she’s doing human experimentation and talking about her showing she’s “trustworthy”
5/28/2024 c23 Felon GT
I’ve been reading the recursive “stargazing” on ao3 where canon reacts watching DOs and meets some of DOS who got sucked into the movie theatre. Your stories inspired a lot of recursive. You made a huge branch out of the Naruto fandom for Shikako is a extraordinary person
I’ve been reading the recursive “stargazing” on ao3 where canon reacts watching DOs and meets some of DOS who got sucked into the movie theatre. Your stories inspired a lot of recursive. You made a huge branch out of the Naruto fandom for Shikako is a extraordinary person
5/21/2024 c98 Felon GT
So I decided to listen to the story audio book first from the guy you recommended on your tumblr. Then I watch the anime episode so I can have better visual of shikako in it. Finally I read the fanfic so I get a better imagery of the whole thing. Sometimes I imagine what if Shikako Nara was a playable character in the ultimate ninja games.
So I decided to listen to the story audio book first from the guy you recommended on your tumblr. Then I watch the anime episode so I can have better visual of shikako in it. Finally I read the fanfic so I get a better imagery of the whole thing. Sometimes I imagine what if Shikako Nara was a playable character in the ultimate ninja games.
5/19/2024 c79 blazingwolffang
she's right it was bull shit nobody investigated anything cuz if they did they know its not even really a seal cuz it has no end point also how would she know its illegal if no one told her shit i keep all my future sealing knowledge an absolute secret and you do not want know what lengths i would go to for malicious compliance
she's right it was bull shit nobody investigated anything cuz if they did they know its not even really a seal cuz it has no end point also how would she know its illegal if no one told her shit i keep all my future sealing knowledge an absolute secret and you do not want know what lengths i would go to for malicious compliance
5/17/2024 c55 blazingwolffang
Fuu wasn't silent and stoic she was energetic and loud and constantly asking people to be friends he'll she asked kakuzu to be her friend
Fuu wasn't silent and stoic she was energetic and loud and constantly asking people to be friends he'll she asked kakuzu to be her friend
5/15/2024 c39 blazingwolffang
I that scenario they were actively controlled by Pedomaru so if he died well they'd regain self control and probably stay till the next hokage then the 2nd would cancel the Edo Tensei. If the fabric either say they stay bad any way pervy sage can seal them
I that scenario they were actively controlled by Pedomaru so if he died well they'd regain self control and probably stay till the next hokage then the 2nd would cancel the Edo Tensei. If the fabric either say they stay bad any way pervy sage can seal them