for Dreaming of Sunshine3/30 c57 MordredVisor
I can understand that throughout the years one would lose the isekai knowledge but seriously since this is already life and death and she is already armed with the knowledge of the future, I'd say that is one of the most if not the most critical weapon of all weapons to defeating adversaries in the world that she's in right now. There's really absolutely no excuse to forget these kinds of details since it can command the will of a lot people involved. Should've made a mental note or a series of secured notes to save all those details that's important to the plot to prevent any tragedies
I can understand that throughout the years one would lose the isekai knowledge but seriously since this is already life and death and she is already armed with the knowledge of the future, I'd say that is one of the most if not the most critical weapon of all weapons to defeating adversaries in the world that she's in right now. There's really absolutely no excuse to forget these kinds of details since it can command the will of a lot people involved. Should've made a mental note or a series of secured notes to save all those details that's important to the plot to prevent any tragedies
3/28 c126 Guest
I am done with this fic, the fact that I tolerated it this long is in itself both a miracle and a compliment to the writer’s skill. I was excited when I saw the 150 chapters what I didn’t know was that it was filled with filler, chapters that have no contribution to the plot or character development. I kept waiting to see improvement to the main character seeing as she has fore knowledge and is an adult but I was greatly disappointed, not only in the character’s training to have more power so that she’s taken seriously by the higher ups but also in emotional development. The character managed to be less immature than 12 year olds and thought than communication was the villain. Don’t even get me started on the power scale inconsistencies, early chapters she has the chakra control to make origami then later Sakura has better control than her, early chapters she’s a intellectual genius able to plan around combat situations and win, then later she’s fumbling around the battle field. She’s a sensor but is constantly being caught off guard at some point it’s not being careless it’s lazy writing to force a plot point. Early on she can fight a jinchuuriki and not get seriously hurt but later struggles against genin. There are so many other examples that frustrate me. This story is a constant effort by the author to nerf the character and make her an emotional mess to create angst. I like angst and emotional content as much as the next person but no so much when it’s clearly deliberated. I don’t mean you shouldn’t add chapters from the less important episodes from Naruto or not add your own spins and ideas to the story but most of these chapter don’t add anything to advancing the story.
I am done with this fic, the fact that I tolerated it this long is in itself both a miracle and a compliment to the writer’s skill. I was excited when I saw the 150 chapters what I didn’t know was that it was filled with filler, chapters that have no contribution to the plot or character development. I kept waiting to see improvement to the main character seeing as she has fore knowledge and is an adult but I was greatly disappointed, not only in the character’s training to have more power so that she’s taken seriously by the higher ups but also in emotional development. The character managed to be less immature than 12 year olds and thought than communication was the villain. Don’t even get me started on the power scale inconsistencies, early chapters she has the chakra control to make origami then later Sakura has better control than her, early chapters she’s a intellectual genius able to plan around combat situations and win, then later she’s fumbling around the battle field. She’s a sensor but is constantly being caught off guard at some point it’s not being careless it’s lazy writing to force a plot point. Early on she can fight a jinchuuriki and not get seriously hurt but later struggles against genin. There are so many other examples that frustrate me. This story is a constant effort by the author to nerf the character and make her an emotional mess to create angst. I like angst and emotional content as much as the next person but no so much when it’s clearly deliberated. I don’t mean you shouldn’t add chapters from the less important episodes from Naruto or not add your own spins and ideas to the story but most of these chapter don’t add anything to advancing the story.
3/27 c115 Guest
Really? Letting enemies go? That’s just plain stupid. I swear if Karen shows up again I’m gonna be so man because that’s just lazy writing and forcing the plot. She had the upper and should’ve taken her prisoner. This is just frustrating. This is what I was talking about, one minute our mc is a smart badass the next she’s bumbling about, struggling against irrelevant people.
Really? Letting enemies go? That’s just plain stupid. I swear if Karen shows up again I’m gonna be so man because that’s just lazy writing and forcing the plot. She had the upper and should’ve taken her prisoner. This is just frustrating. This is what I was talking about, one minute our mc is a smart badass the next she’s bumbling about, struggling against irrelevant people.
3/26 c96 Guest
This was fun to read.
This was fun to read.
3/26 c95 Guest
The mc’s tendency to let people win is really frustrating and condescending. She doesn’t let people have the chance to prove themselves which can be detrimental to their growth and she doesn’t let herself grow either with the constant doubting herself. Honestly the power rating for he is inconsistent, one minute she’s winning against Jounin and the next she’s struggling against genin, one chapter she’s a sharp strategist the next she’s stumbling around. It’s obvious you’ve been nerfing the character as the story progressed to create tension in the fights but honestly it’s frustrating to see her regressing chapter by chapter.
The mc’s tendency to let people win is really frustrating and condescending. She doesn’t let people have the chance to prove themselves which can be detrimental to their growth and she doesn’t let herself grow either with the constant doubting herself. Honestly the power rating for he is inconsistent, one minute she’s winning against Jounin and the next she’s struggling against genin, one chapter she’s a sharp strategist the next she’s stumbling around. It’s obvious you’ve been nerfing the character as the story progressed to create tension in the fights but honestly it’s frustrating to see her regressing chapter by chapter.
3/26 c80 Guest
I have no idea what this arc accomplished. It was more of a filler than anything else.
I have no idea what this arc accomplished. It was more of a filler than anything else.
3/28 c47 MordredVisor
now this is what im looking forward to, the first ever naruto movie ive seen and it was fantastic. i missed it
now this is what im looking forward to, the first ever naruto movie ive seen and it was fantastic. i missed it
3/26 c79 Guest
This story feels like a filler now. Also the Mc, for someone who knows the future and has has survived multiple near death experiences puts little effort into bettering themselves it’s a little frustrating.
This story feels like a filler now. Also the Mc, for someone who knows the future and has has survived multiple near death experiences puts little effort into bettering themselves it’s a little frustrating.
3/25 c46 Guest
I don’t understand how Shikako didn’t get promoted. She’s shown herself to be capable and smart. She took care of her and protected her teammates when they were hurt. Managed to pass the second test despite injury. She led a successful mission that to save Sasuke and take care of Gaara without much complications. She helped her peers with information gathering for their 3rd round and helped train and form counters to their opponents. So for the life of me I don’t get how Shino, Shikamaru and Naruto get to be Chuunin and she doesn’t, it doesn’t make any sense, she showed the most capabilities out of all of them.
I don’t understand how Shikako didn’t get promoted. She’s shown herself to be capable and smart. She took care of her and protected her teammates when they were hurt. Managed to pass the second test despite injury. She led a successful mission that to save Sasuke and take care of Gaara without much complications. She helped her peers with information gathering for their 3rd round and helped train and form counters to their opponents. So for the life of me I don’t get how Shino, Shikamaru and Naruto get to be Chuunin and she doesn’t, it doesn’t make any sense, she showed the most capabilities out of all of them.
3/25 c149 
16Blackbird0
I really want Shikako to go on a mission with Jiraiya, requiring their sealing expertise, and for borh of then to whip out plastic sunglasses. I can just picture itthe two of them crowded around a seal talking enthusiastically while other people judge them so hard >.<
16Blackbird0I really want Shikako to go on a mission with Jiraiya, requiring their sealing expertise, and for borh of then to whip out plastic sunglasses. I can just picture itthe two of them crowded around a seal talking enthusiastically while other people judge them so hard >.<
3/18 c1 29Hellfires Fury
One of my absolute favorite fics. Rereading it again for the nth time and it’s truly one of the best written stories (not just fanfic) I’ve ever been lucky enough to read.
29Hellfires FuryOne of my absolute favorite fics. Rereading it again for the nth time and it’s truly one of the best written stories (not just fanfic) I’ve ever been lucky enough to read.
3/16 c2 Dewichuu7
how da heck did ya know bout X? twitter wasnt rebranded to that till 2023, this was created in 2011!
how da heck did ya know bout X? twitter wasnt rebranded to that till 2023, this was created in 2011!