2/16/2015 c1 Rediron101
I hope this gets through.
Name:Red Iron
Nickname: Red
Age:17
Gender:male
Rank in Flock:Sentinel because no one gets to them without going through him
Appearance:6"3 and very well built, 174lb thanks to all of his muscles, his hair is crimson blood red, his eyes are sky blue until he goes berserk, than his sclera(white stuff) and iris(color) turn light red and his pupils and the outlining of the iris is crimson blood red like his hair
Personality: serious, sometimes a jokester, loyal to his friends, kind and gentle but yet strong and reliable too, and when needed be he can pull off some serious burn comments
Wings: wingspan19-20 feet long and is crimson blood red
Likes: roses, red, sparring, honest and respectful people, rubies, fire and coats
Dislikes: bullies who pick on others just because they're "bigger" than them, large bodies of water, a**holes, liars, stuck-up snobs and he FUCKING HATES COLD BLOODED MURDERERS, RAPE AND RAPIST
History: His family had died in a house fire and the white coats found him and took him in for research since the flames were actually protecting him.
Weaknesses: he wants to know about his origins, swimming
Strengths: he has his flock and he can protect them even flow the flames, his swords "Hell Fire" since he can light them aflame and slash down his opponents in seconds
Crush: well it would take alot of effort for him to fall in love with someone so good luck ladies
Fashion Sense: has a matrix style going on except it's all red, even the glasses are red
He can slash bullets in midair when he's berserk and can control all types of metals and he can walk through, breath, manipulate, and eat flames. He is an expert at dual wielding blades and has little experience with guns.

11/22/2011 c1 no one u need to know
Sorry about not finishing. The comment thing was going wack-o!

Anyway...

Likes: Swimming, reading, eating cupcakes with yellow frosting, running as fast as he can, flying slowly, enjoying stars, eating pizza, smiling, playing the guitar.

Dislikes: Mean people, black olives, blue frosting, sleeping in trees, homeless people with weapons, amusement parks, people who don't like him even though they have never talked to him, alchohol, people who say mean things about his father.

History: His mom died when Teague was young, and his dad is an alchoholic who drinks at bars all day every day and passes out on the streets. He had an older sister, Paris, who ran away when she was 9 and Teague was 5. But Paris couldn't survive on her own so she died in the streets. Teague was sent to an orphanedge at age 13, but he broke out and The School captured him, giving him wings and genetics of a sparrow. His dad is still alive in Chicago, but Teague hasn't seen him since he was 11. Although his dad was a jerk, Teague likes to believe his dad still loves him.

Weakness: He gets defensive when people talk trash about his dad, and he can get a little violent. Also, he is stubborn.

Strengths: Can tell anything about a person through their music, and he also is very fast at swimming and running.

Crush: Yes. He likes people who are kind-hearted and can take the time to converse with him. He also preferes girls with dirty blond hair and/or blue eyes, but it's not required. :)

11/12/2011 c1 XD Demon
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History: Razor's parents left him when he was 2. Then the School got a hold of him. They injected him with Owl DNA. A whitecoat claimed that he was Razor's father. Then he learned the truth and killed the whitecoat. The other whitecoats put him in a fight against seven Erasers. During all of the commotion, Razor managed to escape the School and flew to Mexico. Where he learned the Lucho-Libre style of fighting.

Weakness: Unable to think before he acts and ignores the leader of the group.

Strengths: Very skilled and brutal fighter. Fights like Rey Mysterio. Can steal virtually anything, puck locks and hack computers.

Crush: Yes, who maybe a fellow group member.

Fashion sense: Could care less about fashion. He weres a black zip-up hoodie over a white tank top. He weres a pair of torn jeans and steel-toed boots. He weres a bandana over his mouth and fingerless biker gloves.

10/10/2011 c1 7village bicycle
Herro :)

Aftermath is one word! Otherwise, it sounds like it's after math class! :) 

Name: Redd 

Nickname: -

Age: 16

Gender: female

Rank in flock: I don't mind :)

Appearance (human): she has corn-husk blonde hair, which is wavy and falls over her face. It stops at her waist, but she usually puts it into a loose bun. Her eyes are large and tortoiseshell. Redd's lips are pale pink and her skin is pale, nearly white, and blemishless. She's about 5'7, slender, flexible, lithe and stealthy. 

Personality: she's adventurous, daring, very stubborn, sarcastic, imaginative, bubbly, always smiling, can never keep a straight face, ambitious and talkative. She is wary of strangers and very watchful, but once she is loyal to you, she will never betray your trust. She goes silent when she's angry and lashes out.

Appearance (wings): she has rosella wings; look them up for colouring, if you don't know ;) Redd has a 15 foot wingspan 

Likes: Little Red Riding Hood (her favourite), climbing trees, flying, the outdoors, mangos, forests, swimming, hugging people, laughing, chocolate, marshmallows, tomato sauce, fairytales, Disney, stories

Dislikes: meat (she's vegetarian), judgmental people, government, cages, whitecoats, the School, being bossed around, being mistreated, seeing people hurt, guns, war, unimaginitivity, dogs

History: Redd believes that she was a test-tube baby, having no recollection of a life before the School. They almost killed her off for her fatal flaw (which will be in weaknesses), but decided against it. Her branch of the School exploded when she was eight, and she was horribly injured, but through all the blood and pain she seized the opportunity and escaped. She was on the run for four years until she was recaptured for another two, but she managed to escape again by fighting her way free. She still hasn't been captured since.

Weakness: her fatal flaw — iron. It burns her and saps at her strength. She also despises fire, after the explosion that nearly killed her, and hates bombs. She would rather die than ever point a gun at someone, and prefers daggers. 

Strengths: she is very skilled at throwing daggers, and is an incredibly strong swimmer. She is at home in forests and would never fall from a tree, nor be caught up one; she makes virtually no noise when she moves. 

 

Crush: i hope that she gets a romance, but i don't know who

Fashion sense: she always wears a thin, silky red cloak, with a hood; she was wearing it, still nameless, when she was thirteen, when someone called her Little Red Riding Hood. She read the story and adapted to her new name, all because of the cloak. It ties at her neck. Underneath, she normally wears black leggings, black combat boots, a white or light grey tank top and a loose, dark grey belt, where she holds her treasured silver dagger. There is also a silver locket around her neck, that stops at about her midrib, but she doesn't know how to open it. She found it when she was eight. She also has a gold bracelet around her left wrist (all the other experiments had iron except for her) that reads, 'X67, 277391'. But I suppose this is her clothes, not fashion sense, hey? Well, she prefers simplicity, and is always in her cloak.

Other: nothing else! :)

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Name: Abraxas Damien Snippet

Nickname: Shock

Age: 17

Gender: male

Rank in flock: I don't mind, you pick? Who's leader? Maybe him leader, second- or third-in-command ... what say you?

Appearance (human): he has an olive skin tone, and his eyes are black, but his hair is unnaturally white, from an experiment gone wrong. He's about 6'1, thin but with hidden muscle, very fast and agile. 

Personality: he's fun-loving, and is a genius when it comes to cars, guns, bombs and mechanical stuff ... but not much else, really, unless it's fighting. He's very playful and is always fun to be around, but when he's upset he acts rashly and says bad things that he doesn't mean to, and feels horrible about it later. Generally he's happy and a jokester; he's an optimist, and always looks for the best in people before labeling them off as bad. He tries not to have powerful emotions, as that ends up badly, and always tries to reign them in.

Appearance (wings): he's 3% sparrow! Therefore, he has sparrow wings, and if you don't know what they look like look them up because I don't want to describe all the different shades ... ;) 16.5 foot wingspan

Likes: cars, guns, bombs, mechanical stuff, technology, fire, big cities, fancy things, dogs, playing about, laughing, girls

Dislikes: whitecoats, water, Erasers, the School, bad guys, Linx, snakes, winter, being upset, his family/friends being upset

History: Shock grew up with his father, Damien, his mother, Clarisse, his younger sister, Bella, and her twin, Mia, until he was seven, in Canada. They were a happy family — until Shock (or 'Abraxas') got taken from their home on Bella and Mia's fourth birthday. He was standing in the front garden picking flowers for his sisters when three Erasers (or different villains) rolled up and gagged him, throwing him in their truck and taking him to the School, miles and miles away in Death Valley. The moment he arrived they began testing, and a month later he had his new wings.  He managed to escape when he was ten, by fighting his way out when all the Erasers were on an important mission — most of the whitecoats couldn't fight anyway. He flew straight to Canada, but when he arrived at his old home, there was a new family living there. He rang the doorbell and asked if they knew what happened to the Snippet family, but they said they moved far away. At least they were safe, though, Shock thought. By then, he was still going as Abraxas. The generous family noticed that he was only ten and seemingly had no one, so actually took him in for two years ... only for the father to be a whitecoat, monitoring Shock/Abraxas the whole time. He ran away, and reached a forest. He was so overcome by emotion that he punched a tree — which burst into flames as if it had been struck by lightening. After more ... experimentation ... he discovered that when he was having a particular burst of any emotion, he could emit electricity from his hands, but it was a danger hazard to others, as he could shock them. When he first joined the flock, at fourteen, he accidentally shocked one of the members — from that day onwards, he was known as Shock. He can also see into the past, but not future.

Weakness: if he was really, really happy he could hurt somebody he loves. He's still training himself on his powers to keep that from happening, and to use them in battle. Also, he despises water, as it saps at his powers and energy — unless he's drinking it. 

Strengths: he's very strong, cautious and observant, and is very protective of the flock. Also, he's very strong mentally, and never cries ... not since he was separated from his family. 

Crush: I really hope so! But i don't know who :S

Fashion sense: he just wears whatever he can get ahold of, usually jeans, a top and sometimes a hoodie. He doesn't give a damn about fashion itself, really, but if people look like cat poop he's not gonna appreciate it ;)

Other: I'm done!

9/19/2011 c1 ShortLittlePixie
Sorry for the spelling mistakes, I'm typing all of this up on my iPod.. Anyway, instead of 'gunman' in my last review it's supposed to say 'human' and instead of 'user' it's supposed to say 'her'

I also left out some stuff..

She also has a fear of spiders, and snakes.

With her recurring nightmares, the people in the car with 'Caralyn' always die...

Her full name is Delilah Katelyn Jones.

When she was known as Caralyn, her full name was Caralyn Angela Cooley.

Sorry for all of the spelling mistakes again,

Mae :)

9/4/2011 c1 6FangandIggyRule
I submitted a character named Ash Hayden, but I used the wrong profile. That was my sister's profile, and I forgot to check if it was hers or mine. Sorry for that!

9/4/2011 c1 13dawn-roulette
Name: Dalia Corine Sophia Renee Kuloff (real name)

Nickname: Dallas (just Dallas nothing else)

Age: 15 close to 16, she thinks

Gender: Girl

Rank in Flock: lower rank due to her personality

Apperarance (human): Firey curly red hair that goes down to right above her shoulders, she parts it off to the right side and if its any other way she flips(not orange or stawberry blond red like a penny! dark copper) Bright florencent blue eyes with flecs of gold around the pupil, lots of freckles. long skinny about 5'9" has very long skinny fingers she's constently popping along with all her other bones(with annoys the others) always has a "up to no good" smirk on her face. is a light tan under her freckles. her lips are incredably pink. Always has a dark amost black eye liner looking ring around her eyes like she has make up on but she never does.She also has 6 piercing on each ear.

Personality: She is very immature and childish. She is a huge prankster and hates people who want to know what she's doing. enjoys fighting and braking the law to feel powerful.Tom-boy. She is very into rock and metal (and death cab for cutie her emotional weakness) has a thing for guys with black hair (honestly i'm not even thinking of making her a Lissa!I'm basicly making her like me xD) She is boy crazy and a huge flirt. Boy magnet.She has the attention span of a dead squirrel. She can be really deep when she isn't trying to commite a crime. She basicly an off the wall misfit with a real person under the trouble maker

Appearance (wings): like a blondish/ goldish color with freckle like spots of white and black (rad right?)

Likes: Green Day (for sure!) emo guys, being bad, defying athority, parnks, fighting, showing her strenghth, winning, jersey shore, cotten candy flavored or sented anything, sting(it interests her) oak trees, being alone, crying (she has reasons)

Dislikes: People watching her cry, Country music, goody goodys, people telling her what to do, losing, hippies, girly girls, security camaras,Water, the oceans, any body of liquid larger than a bowl of soup.cats, people who are too fake or too real.

History: She was 5 when she was kidnapped. Her parents died when she was 2 in a car accident. Then her Older half brother took her in until he died a year later in a shooting. So she lived with her uncle and aunt when they split up she stayed with her uncle and his four sons. She thought her uncle's girlfriend was picking her up from school so she go into a women's car (a white coat) and was never seen again she lived in parts of northern Oregon before she was kidnapped.She was physicly and sexually abused by earasers at the school when she was 12. Also she was held under water ,until she pased out, by whitecoats.

Weakness: Water, she will freaze up in a stuned state if she is in water past her mid shin. she will have a mental brake down if she sees a car crash.

Strenghths: Fire, she feels so powerful when she's around it. She is also an amazing fighter ,flyer, and runner. She is very good when it comes to physical action.

Crush: black haired punk like guys are her thing so theres that.(i'll let you choose) it would be fun for her to have a romance

Fashion sense: lots of black and white she also wears blu a lot because she likes her eyes, skinny jeans and graphic tee's zip up hoodies is always wearing a zip up hoodie.

Power: can levatate small objects with her mind. like really small and light the heaviest she can levatate is a medimum sized glass cup.

Over All? She's a off the wall, sarcastic, trouble maker, that is easily annoyed and distracted, who really has a nasty past that she rarely lets anyone know about.