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10/10/2011 c7 Why
It was nice but Spyro an cynder are not getting enough 'spot light' I actually found it annoying when you mentioned shieke... It's still really good, it's addicting keep writing.
10/9/2011 c7 CrystalPelt
Awesomeness!

~Crystal the Jewel Dragoness
10/6/2011 c7 Guest
cool chapter (very romantic) keep it up and see if u can get that chapter in as soon as u can
10/6/2011 c6 Guest
NICE CHAPTER MAN! iliked how you put some romance in there and the chapter being longer made me think you were enjoying writing this keep it up and try to make the capters as long as this one
10/6/2011 c5 Guest
cool chapter lovved the action shike is an awsome OC
10/6/2011 c4 Guest
I liked some of the plot of this chapter but it intervenes to much with the human world also i saw a couple f spelling mistakes like naxt for next or knoewn for known
10/6/2011 c3 Guest
O.K. CHAPTER 3 JUST AMAZING ITS TO AWSOME FOR WORDS IF I COULD I WOULD MAKE UP ONE!
10/6/2011 c2 Guest
cool ch2 but alittle to much conversing on how u weere introduced to spyro , just alittle less and dtw i cracked up when spyro threw his head in the water
10/6/2011 c1 Guest
cool chapter... and spyro preforming thet earth stunt..GENEUS! keep it up
9/29/2011 c5 1soldier of knowledge
The best chapter yet. Sparx's pun and the demise of the semi-intelligent Grublin were both qiute amusing. The romance does seem to be dropping off though, thought I'd let you know. Keep up the good work!
9/29/2011 c4 soldier of knowledge
Aside from the OC, i like this chapter (the OC seems to be slightly overpowered)! Hope you don't mind me being blunt in my reviews, I'll stop if you don't. I forgot to mention earlier, I haven't seen any spelling or grammer mistakes, nice job.
9/29/2011 c3 soldier of knowledge
That was a nifty way for Spyro to catch the fish, I admit. One thing confuses me, though. You write as if they already have an established pattern, but didn't the third game just end? I aploigise if you already put the anwer in a future chapter, I'm reviewing as I read.
9/29/2011 c2 soldier of knowledge
Short chapter, so I don't have much to say. That was a nice look inside of Cynder's head, but the mood swing was sudden.
9/29/2011 c1 soldier of knowledge
word of advice to Spyro: save the lengthy explanations for when the games of tag is over. on a more pofessinal note, you have Cynder's charcter down well. But Spyro seems a mite bit more aggressive and longwinded in general than i remember. i like the humor though
9/28/2011 c4 11The Helpless Romantic
I really like this story! This Shike is interesting, and I fell the need to tell you that this sort of "imagination version of a real life organism" is what is known as a Cocigrue. I really like how Spyro and Cynder are fiance's in this btw.
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