
11/16/2013 c31
3curiousbeing
I fucking loved this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. Keep writing great stories!

I fucking loved this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us. Keep writing great stories!
10/31/2013 c31 andersse
Great story. Beautifully written, complex characters. Why can't I find a man who shies emotion like this one?
Great story. Beautifully written, complex characters. Why can't I find a man who shies emotion like this one?
10/30/2013 c31 Sayblegirl
Such a sweet story. I really loved Bella's personality and inner monologue. She cracked me up several times. And Edward was very sweet. Loved him. Thanks for sharing your story.
Such a sweet story. I really loved Bella's personality and inner monologue. She cracked me up several times. And Edward was very sweet. Loved him. Thanks for sharing your story.
10/30/2013 c21 andersse
I'm breezing through this story. It's so good! You write awkward people and their voice messages brilliantly! And that's meant as a compliment!
I'm breezing through this story. It's so good! You write awkward people and their voice messages brilliantly! And that's meant as a compliment!
10/21/2013 c31 HappyEndingLover
What a great story I am not a writer so I am at a loss for words. The feelings were so real. I kind of put you in my mind as the therapist;)
What a great story I am not a writer so I am at a loss for words. The feelings were so real. I kind of put you in my mind as the therapist;)
10/15/2013 c31 Leslie
I can't believe that I just read this story. I seriously thought that I've read everything you've ever written, and somehow I missed this. I'm so happy I read it. It was beautiful. Thank you for this and for all of your wonderful stories! You are an amazing writer. Write more stories for us! I know that's selfish because you're probably so busy, but YOU make us happy. :) Hugs!
I can't believe that I just read this story. I seriously thought that I've read everything you've ever written, and somehow I missed this. I'm so happy I read it. It was beautiful. Thank you for this and for all of your wonderful stories! You are an amazing writer. Write more stories for us! I know that's selfish because you're probably so busy, but YOU make us happy. :) Hugs!
9/19/2013 c18 miranda04
Oh, that paragraph about her aching because of his pain...that she can handle her own pain, but not his. I feel for her.
Oh, that paragraph about her aching because of his pain...that she can handle her own pain, but not his. I feel for her.
9/19/2013 c17 miranda04
I knew what he meant immediately, and I knew what she thought. Didn't mean that I didn't feel like I was punched in the gut during that exchange.
I knew what he meant immediately, and I knew what she thought. Didn't mean that I didn't feel like I was punched in the gut during that exchange.
9/19/2013 c14 miranda04
I've never been hurt in a relationship before, but I just feel for this Bella. I can put myself in her shoes and feel how hurt and nervous and anxious she is feeling.
Then, I hear (read) Edward's words, and I get all melty inside!
I've never been hurt in a relationship before, but I just feel for this Bella. I can put myself in her shoes and feel how hurt and nervous and anxious she is feeling.
Then, I hear (read) Edward's words, and I get all melty inside!
9/19/2013 c7 miranda04
Just wanted to pop in again and say how talented I think you are.
Lately, I've been reading some stories that were written well (grammatically speaking), but the stories are just OK; or else I've been reading stuff that could be really good, if the author could just learn how to spell and use proper punctuation.
[just in case other authors are reading this, I'm not talking about stories that are on my favorites list].
Anyway, I just REALLY appreciate an author who can come up with wonderful story lines, have a great blend of narrative and dialogue, have realistic characters, and does not butcher the English language.
So, thank you.
Just wanted to pop in again and say how talented I think you are.
Lately, I've been reading some stories that were written well (grammatically speaking), but the stories are just OK; or else I've been reading stuff that could be really good, if the author could just learn how to spell and use proper punctuation.
[just in case other authors are reading this, I'm not talking about stories that are on my favorites list].
Anyway, I just REALLY appreciate an author who can come up with wonderful story lines, have a great blend of narrative and dialogue, have realistic characters, and does not butcher the English language.
So, thank you.