12/16/2011 c14 Erroneous78
Squeees a bit louder and stomps her feet up and down on the floor *really really* fast in excitement :-)
Squeees a bit louder and stomps her feet up and down on the floor *really really* fast in excitement :-)
12/16/2011 c10 Erroneous78
Oh flip! Im breathing so heavily now I sound like a crank caller!
*need to calm and breathe properly*
Oh flip! Im breathing so heavily now I sound like a crank caller!
*need to calm and breathe properly*
12/16/2011 c9 Erroneous78
Ooh I wanna let out a lil squeeee! But only a small one, y'know - just for now :)
Poor Rose :(
Ooh I wanna let out a lil squeeee! But only a small one, y'know - just for now :)
Poor Rose :(
12/2/2011 c14 2Sunflower Fran
I also love that he keeps saying: "I'm really glad you're here."
How sweet is your Edward in this story, jeez.
And I spit out MY coffee when Bella called HER coffee girl a perky fetus...your sinus infection can't be that bad if you can think of this stuff!
I will keep reading...
I also love that he keeps saying: "I'm really glad you're here."
How sweet is your Edward in this story, jeez.
And I spit out MY coffee when Bella called HER coffee girl a perky fetus...your sinus infection can't be that bad if you can think of this stuff!
I will keep reading...
12/2/2011 c13 Sunflower Fran
I love this chapter. When she is in the coffee shop 5 minutes early and he's not there and she is all insecure and feeling so alone. You captured those emotions so perfectly.
These two are such sad souls, but I see light at the end of this tunnel.
Lov'in this story as much as Jacob loves his Rabbit...his car...you know the one he is always fixing...not the other kind of rabbit...
I love this chapter. When she is in the coffee shop 5 minutes early and he's not there and she is all insecure and feeling so alone. You captured those emotions so perfectly.
These two are such sad souls, but I see light at the end of this tunnel.
Lov'in this story as much as Jacob loves his Rabbit...his car...you know the one he is always fixing...not the other kind of rabbit...
12/2/2011 c2 Sunflower Fran
Perfect, perfect ending. And having read most of your stories by now, I almost bought it! But the summary says romance/hurt/comfort, so I knew he was only making a joke to lighten the mood, and you were making a joke so you could say C**k in chapter 2. Whatever, it works for me and I am on to chapter 3!
Thanks for writing and posting every day, that kind of schedule is love for me, like reviews are for you!
Perfect, perfect ending. And having read most of your stories by now, I almost bought it! But the summary says romance/hurt/comfort, so I knew he was only making a joke to lighten the mood, and you were making a joke so you could say C**k in chapter 2. Whatever, it works for me and I am on to chapter 3!
Thanks for writing and posting every day, that kind of schedule is love for me, like reviews are for you!
11/28/2011 c31 TheSpatulaGirl
Hey there, I feel like I haven't read your writing in ages. Becuase I'm a stupid idiot that doesn't have you on author alert! So stupid of me!
I started to read this because I needed to cry and you tweeted about this. Whilst reading this I realised that I missed your writing so much and why I love it so much. Before my fag of your stories were WSiD and RT but this trumps them for me. I feel like you really tapped into a deeper emotion here, I loved this story so much. I felt everything B felt and your words give me shivers. Like in all you other storys I can imagine all the scenes in my head. I knew you were amazing and this just tripled it. And gooshh your lemons and the way you describe touches- big and small- I just die. I am in awe of your writing powers! X
Hey there, I feel like I haven't read your writing in ages. Becuase I'm a stupid idiot that doesn't have you on author alert! So stupid of me!
I started to read this because I needed to cry and you tweeted about this. Whilst reading this I realised that I missed your writing so much and why I love it so much. Before my fag of your stories were WSiD and RT but this trumps them for me. I feel like you really tapped into a deeper emotion here, I loved this story so much. I felt everything B felt and your words give me shivers. Like in all you other storys I can imagine all the scenes in my head. I knew you were amazing and this just tripled it. And gooshh your lemons and the way you describe touches- big and small- I just die. I am in awe of your writing powers! X
11/26/2011 c31 Killrkat
I really enjoyed this story. It reminds me of someone close to me going through a similar situation. Some of the ways in which you phrased Bella's thoughts and feelings really struck a cord with me. Thank you for sharing your art.
I really enjoyed this story. It reminds me of someone close to me going through a similar situation. Some of the ways in which you phrased Bella's thoughts and feelings really struck a cord with me. Thank you for sharing your art.
11/23/2011 c31 Fliberty
It's so nice to see Bella happy.
I enjoyed the idea of Bella seeing Tyler again and dismissing him so abruptly.
Thanks for your sharing your story, I enjoyed it very much xxx
It's so nice to see Bella happy.
I enjoyed the idea of Bella seeing Tyler again and dismissing him so abruptly.
Thanks for your sharing your story, I enjoyed it very much xxx
11/23/2011 c29 Fliberty
These two are lovely. They are so brave to risk being hurt again after what they have been through.
These two are lovely. They are so brave to risk being hurt again after what they have been through.
11/23/2011 c28 Fliberty
I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward staying over goes. Will she or won't she freak out?
I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward staying over goes. Will she or won't she freak out?