for Solstice11/23/2011 c12 Fliberty
I'm glad Bella finally told someone her story. I'm really glad it was Edward. He is so sweet and patient with her.
The visit to Renata was funny as usual. It seems Bella is finally making progress.
I'm glad Bella finally told someone her story. I'm really glad it was Edward. He is so sweet and patient with her.
The visit to Renata was funny as usual. It seems Bella is finally making progress.
11/23/2011 c10 Fliberty
I loved Bella's slip about his cologne :-)
Edward is a great mixture of careful sweet and confident. He seems to know what Bella needs instinctively.
I loved Bella's slip about his cologne :-)
Edward is a great mixture of careful sweet and confident. He seems to know what Bella needs instinctively.
11/23/2011 c9 Fliberty
Hmm, this is sweet but I'm worried things are moving too fast and Bella will freak out.
Hmm, this is sweet but I'm worried things are moving too fast and Bella will freak out.
11/23/2011 c7 Fliberty
It was brave of Bella to try a walk with Edward..
I'm glad she feels she can tell Edward she needs to leave instead of enduring her discomfort and then avoiding him.
I think Edward has realised that friends might be a safer option for Bella right now.
It was brave of Bella to try a walk with Edward..
I'm glad she feels she can tell Edward she needs to leave instead of enduring her discomfort and then avoiding him.
I think Edward has realised that friends might be a safer option for Bella right now.
11/23/2011 c6 Fliberty
Aw, that was sweet.
It was brave of Edward to go out on a limb with her again.
Aw, that was sweet.
It was brave of Edward to go out on a limb with her again.
11/23/2011 c5 Fliberty
Naturally, I'm now wondering what "weird shit…you know, sexually" Jasper is really into ;-)
Edward seems like he has done a lot of healing since his divorce.
It sounded like his words about being closed off to people were aimed at Bella...
Naturally, I'm now wondering what "weird shit…you know, sexually" Jasper is really into ;-)
Edward seems like he has done a lot of healing since his divorce.
It sounded like his words about being closed off to people were aimed at Bella...
11/23/2011 c3 Fliberty
Well at least she got a laugh out of the evening :-)
Edward seems sweet but he is also very persistent. I suppose it's possible he just hangs around these things picking up the insecure, newly-divorced women...
Well at least she got a laugh out of the evening :-)
Edward seems sweet but he is also very persistent. I suppose it's possible he just hangs around these things picking up the insecure, newly-divorced women...
11/23/2011 c2 Fliberty
This tells us so much more about Bella and her current frame of mind. There's obviously a lot more story to come for us to find out how her life became like this.
Edward's entrance was good. I'm intrigued by him. I can't decide if he's really smug going with a line like that or if he's sweet and just trying to make her laugh...
This tells us so much more about Bella and her current frame of mind. There's obviously a lot more story to come for us to find out how her life became like this.
Edward's entrance was good. I'm intrigued by him. I can't decide if he's really smug going with a line like that or if he's sweet and just trying to make her laugh...
11/23/2011 c1 Fliberty
Hey, here are my comments on chapter 1, I'm copying my reviews over to your real story:
I like this.
Bella's way of speaking without filter a makes her interesting to read.
It's a sad setting that could have been a little 'dry' but you've included enough of Bella's thoughts and feelings in there to make it interesting and feel real.
x
Hey, here are my comments on chapter 1, I'm copying my reviews over to your real story:
I like this.
Bella's way of speaking without filter a makes her interesting to read.
It's a sad setting that could have been a little 'dry' but you've included enough of Bella's thoughts and feelings in there to make it interesting and feel real.
x
11/22/2011 c5 twiaholic29
I like seeing Bella's interactions with hervtherapist. I wonder if they do pump in truth serum through the ventilation? I also loke how Edward said what he needed to say o her without saying it directly to her. lets see where this goes.
I like seeing Bella's interactions with hervtherapist. I wonder if they do pump in truth serum through the ventilation? I also loke how Edward said what he needed to say o her without saying it directly to her. lets see where this goes.
11/22/2011 c3 twiaholic29
Oh her reaction is so sad. Even though Edward is being so sweet about it, she is truly broken. I hope it doesn't take too long for her to open up.
Oh her reaction is so sad. Even though Edward is being so sweet about it, she is truly broken. I hope it doesn't take too long for her to open up.