for Solstice11/3/2011 c22 phoebelicious
"Your ex-wife must have been an idiot,"
Understatement of the century, but then if she wasn't, then Bella couldn't have Edward.
"His lips are trembling. Or maybe they're mine...I feel tears on my cheeks. I don't know if they're mine…I don't know if they're his."
I love that she's realising he is just as vulnerable and laid bare, as she is.
"Your ex-wife must have been an idiot,"
Understatement of the century, but then if she wasn't, then Bella couldn't have Edward.
"His lips are trembling. Or maybe they're mine...I feel tears on my cheeks. I don't know if they're mine…I don't know if they're his."
I love that she's realising he is just as vulnerable and laid bare, as she is.
11/3/2011 c31 Robsten love4ever
so beautiful and lovely story u did a great job :) i hope you make another chapter cuz this story is so good i don't want to end !
going to my favorite ;)
Farah...
so beautiful and lovely story u did a great job :) i hope you make another chapter cuz this story is so good i don't want to end !
going to my favorite ;)
Farah...
11/3/2011 c5 cecilia4059
If Edward didn't love his ex then why it still hurt? He sounds pretty normal to me then why he still goes to the group meeting. I like the short chapters. Thanks.
If Edward didn't love his ex then why it still hurt? He sounds pretty normal to me then why he still goes to the group meeting. I like the short chapters. Thanks.
11/3/2011 c4 cecilia4059
All the women I know who divorced their husbands (my aunt, college classmates, neighbors) were all happy to get rid of their unhappy marrage. None of them was depressed or anything. I wonder why Bella would react this way to her divorce.
All the women I know who divorced their husbands (my aunt, college classmates, neighbors) were all happy to get rid of their unhappy marrage. None of them was depressed or anything. I wonder why Bella would react this way to her divorce.
11/3/2011 c31 
6jarkin33
I know that I have been incredibly fail at reviewing, but i'm going to be going back and reading this again and again and will definitely be getting the chapters I missed.
I ust wanted to thank you for letting me be a prereader on this wonderful story. I know I shared a bit about why this touched me so deeply. Most of us have been here in some way or form, the anger, the hurt, the depression and dispair.. thinking what's wrong with me, what did I do wrong.
This Bella - she showed that that is ok... for a bit. Life isn't perfect, feelings aren't perfect, there's no manual to how someone should feel about something.
and god this hit close to home, so I've been there for sure. Like I said, it's like you were following me around watching my life about 6 years ago...
This story is about healing and not healing for someone else, but for yourself and I love that. I love that she didn't want to do it for him, he was a catalyst for sure, but this was something she had to do for her.
"I'm really happy."
xox thank you again for sharing and I adore you!
jaime
6jarkin33I know that I have been incredibly fail at reviewing, but i'm going to be going back and reading this again and again and will definitely be getting the chapters I missed.
I ust wanted to thank you for letting me be a prereader on this wonderful story. I know I shared a bit about why this touched me so deeply. Most of us have been here in some way or form, the anger, the hurt, the depression and dispair.. thinking what's wrong with me, what did I do wrong.
This Bella - she showed that that is ok... for a bit. Life isn't perfect, feelings aren't perfect, there's no manual to how someone should feel about something.
and god this hit close to home, so I've been there for sure. Like I said, it's like you were following me around watching my life about 6 years ago...
This story is about healing and not healing for someone else, but for yourself and I love that. I love that she didn't want to do it for him, he was a catalyst for sure, but this was something she had to do for her.
"I'm really happy."
xox thank you again for sharing and I adore you!
jaime
11/3/2011 c18 phoebelicious
"You could hurt me," I whisper.
"You could hurt me," he whispers in return.
And there it is
"You could hurt me," I whisper.
"You could hurt me," he whispers in return.
And there it is
11/3/2011 c16 phoebelicious
"That's the problem, Bella," he whispers. And even over the sounds of the city, I hear him. "I don't want to be your friend."
*gasp*
"That's the problem, Bella," he whispers. And even over the sounds of the city, I hear him. "I don't want to be your friend."
*gasp*
11/3/2011 c15 phoebelicious
"But I don't want to move forward," he says, his voice cracking. "I wanted her to realize she'd made a mistake. I wanted her to come to her senses…and then come back to me. I would have taken her back. I would still take her back."
*sob*
"But I don't want to move forward," he says, his voice cracking. "I wanted her to realize she'd made a mistake. I wanted her to come to her senses…and then come back to me. I would have taken her back. I would still take her back."
*sob*