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11/26/2011 c1 Violet
Hi well first of all you really did improve the story, very nice and interesting I keep liking how you picture every character very well done.
9/11/2011 c1 anonimous
Very good i really liked how you capture anna as a strong girl and not a scardy cat just that when fighting you should really capture the fighting scene but otherwise very well done
9/8/2011 c1 Guest
Finally we get a finished adaptation of Mother. Here's some suggestions, when writing an adaptation you should put some expansion in it. Basically, add more to battle sequences, character bonding, and maybe a good backstory such as maybe adding Maria's?

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