
12/7/2011 c6
162FreekyDisaster18
This is extremely cute. I love the line "... nice surprise, a word I'm beginning to think you need to look up the meaning to, and.." it was an excellent piece of dialogue. Nicely written.

This is extremely cute. I love the line "... nice surprise, a word I'm beginning to think you need to look up the meaning to, and.." it was an excellent piece of dialogue. Nicely written.
9/25/2011 c4
9Simplyobsessed-1
Brainy/knowledgeable!Jackie is always a great Jackie to see in a story and you captured that perfectly in this little one shot. It was a great use of the prompt. Well done.

Brainy/knowledgeable!Jackie is always a great Jackie to see in a story and you captured that perfectly in this little one shot. It was a great use of the prompt. Well done.
9/25/2011 c4
162FreekyDisaster18
Best one liner at the end there from Robbie. Fabulous. Great little chapter and a cute way to say I love you.

Best one liner at the end there from Robbie. Fabulous. Great little chapter and a cute way to say I love you.
9/23/2011 c3
9Simplyobsessed-1
These are excellent little moments and a great use of the prompt table that I thought had died in our challenges forum. Excellent work!

These are excellent little moments and a great use of the prompt table that I thought had died in our challenges forum. Excellent work!
9/15/2011 c2 freekydisaster18
(Laptop broke so I'm doing this on my phone hence not signing in!)
These are cute little moments and YAY to the prompt table being used! That's always good to see! Great use! :)
(Laptop broke so I'm doing this on my phone hence not signing in!)
These are cute little moments and YAY to the prompt table being used! That's always good to see! Great use! :)