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9/11/2011 c1 chococandyz
Curse the Dursleys again, though if not for them, Harry wouldn't have wind up meeting Tsuna and his friends. Hope to see the next chapter soon!^v^
9/10/2011 c1 24Umei no Mai
This is pretty cool. I'd like to see how a summer with the Famiglia would affect Harry. Especially since, with him no longer considering the Dursleys to be 'home', the wards would fall and the idiot muggles would get killed...

The idea of Dumbledore facing off against Reborn and co. is also highly entertaining.
9/9/2011 c1 xXxOtAkU-444xXx
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9/8/2011 c1 Miyanoai
This certainly seems like an interesting story. I'm curious as to where you're going to go with it and whether or not Harry's friends will somehow arrive in Japan as well. Don't really care about pairing, heck who needs romance in these kinds of stories. As for the language barrier...you'd think there'd be a spell for that that Harry could do (although at this point, it would be suspicious if he suddenly understood Japanese, lol). I would just suggest you indent when they're speaking either english or Japanese, cause towards the end, i couldn't really tell (except for Tsuna's bad grammar of course, though I'm surprised he could say that much XD). Wonder what Reborn's gonna find out about him (and how). Anyway, can't wait for the next chap!
9/8/2011 c1 1webpixie
an interesting start, looking forward to seeing where this goes. i just love this xover.

as far as the writing in a different language i always prefer the approach where the author puts the second language all in italics(with a note at the top to let readers know) but still written in English. it doesn't disrupt the flow of reading for us to jump around and find the translation. sadly most readers wont be able to appreciate any work you might put into by actually writing properly in other languages (unless its someone that can read it anyways)
9/8/2011 c1 176Firehedgehog
freaking love the new fic
9/8/2011 c1 1GinaStar
very good so far! I look forward to reading more!
9/8/2011 c1 86WizardsGirl
This sounds really interesting...PLEASE CONTINUE & UPDATE when you can!

Hugs & Kittens,

~Wizard
9/8/2011 c1 5arsenic-graffiti
I like how you lampshaded the oft unexplained plot point of why the Dursleys would bother dragging him overseas. xD

Looking forward to seeing how this will develop, seeing that this is still set early in the series. I think there were a few capitalization and comma errors here and there (a rare case of having just a tad too few commas instead of abusing them), but nothing too serious.

Thank you for updating this at a time when my HP/KHR crossover cravings popped up *A*
9/8/2011 c1 2BonesetBlues
I feel quite bad for Harry. At least he saved Nana! And, if you don't mind telling me, I would love to know the pairings for this story. I am quite a curious person. You don't have to tell me, but I'd very much love to know.
9/8/2011 c1 8Lemo
Yaaaaay I've recently become addicted to this xover! Lucky~

-hopes there's slash-
9/8/2011 c1 12LeeArt
Great story you had made it

Anyway got some curiosity so I want to ask you:

1. This is during Harry's fourth year, right, so I was meant to ask, did the Dursley leave Harry during a holiday and since he is unable to return home, is that mean that Harry will stay in Japan and will not participate in the Triwizard Tournament.

2. I will not ask about pairing, so that one out of the question

3. Are his friends going to find out about his current situation of being left in Japan all alone, gosh i hate those dursley...

4. Will any of his friend will come after him, you know, for example maybe liked Hermione since she travelled a lot with her parents, the Weasleys using any international portkey (but since you have mentioned that Harry couldn't find any Magical community in Japan, so it seems to be impossible for them) or Dumbledore himself will go and fetch him back

Just asking out my curiosity, anyway great plot there, keep up the good work

Please update soon =D
9/8/2011 c1 Zakyla
I can totally see the Dursleys doing that, not sure how they executed it cause surely Harry would have been on the same plane unless they put him in a different class or whatever. There's a few grammer/spelling mistakes but they're easily ignored, and for the differences in language maybe you could just write Japanese in English but instead of using "" you could use {} or [] or something along those lines - you don't have to though, I could follow it along fine, except I couldn't really tell whether Tsuna & co. were speaking Japanese when they met Harry or not because it was just written normally.

Sorry about all that - I'm not picking at things on purpose, honest. Hah.

Pairings: not even 18Harry? Shame, are you open to other cross-pairings say like YamamotoxHermione? Though I think this story would be good without pairings as the title is Famigilia so it sounds like it's just focusing on the Family genre/aspect.

I look forward to more chapters! ^_^
9/8/2011 c1 Hell Changer
Seems a nice one to continue :)
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