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12/27/2013 c15 Guest
I can't wait for more. I have waited forever for Harry to tell the truth. Please write more soon.
12/27/2013 c15 vampireharry the 2
Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
12/25/2013 c15 15Yizuki
You just had to leave it there didn't you? You couldn't give us the reactions of the others when they found out that harry was abandoned by the Dursleys could you. I love the chapter but godamit woman! This is leaving me on pins and needles! Please continue soon!
12/25/2013 c15 2history
I love this chapter! I'm a little disapointed that you stop when Harry said that he was a wizard. But you're the author.. I love the remationship betwee Takeshi and Harry I really hope that they will be together. I love too how Takeshi understands so welll people. I love Takeshi's father. I wonder on gamma too.
12/25/2013 c15 Inevitable Conclusion
YES! I LOVE THIS FIC! 8D

I've been waiting forever for this fic to be updated anr I am beyond elated right now! This fic is such a great read and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Awaiting youre next update,
MERRY CHRISTMAS
12/24/2013 c15 3charm13insomnia
great chapter
12/24/2013 c15 22Slytherin Studios
I love it, I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/24/2013 c14 3PCheshire
well... you're good at this!
and also at making Harry reek angst and pathetic...
love the story though nice change of pace from all the overpowered ones... and fast-paced stories...
10/19/2013 c14 Titania.queen.of.fairys
Well looks like Harry have to explain.
10/4/2013 c13 1YBlue
And ah sorry to be a bother again but I just remembered something that confused me in a previous chapter, at one point Harry is shot with the Dying Will bullet but nothing seems to have happened. Or maybe Harry didn't remember anything other than the pain of the bullet but there still no description of what he did whit the Dying Will or anything. I imagine that Harry only shrugged it of, Tsuna would at least be pretty surprised since he knows Reborn shot Harry.
10/4/2013 c14 YBlue
I love this story and can't wait to see what next ! But I'm a little confused. It seems like maybe something is missing between the last chapter and this one ? We end with Harry being surprised to see Gokudera and then next chapter move to Harry attending Namimori (even thought he's trying to chose between going back to Hogwart or not ?) and there's also no explanation for Gokudera's absence in Italy (although that might come later). I'm also confused by something else, Harry uses spells three times in this chapter and yet at one point he's thinking that the Dursley might have burned all his stuff including his wand. And the first time he uses spells Mochida doesn't ask any question. Did he not see the magic ? Maybe I'm the one who missed something ...
9/13/2013 c14 jgood27
Love this story and can't wait to read more
8/27/2013 c14 Foxfada
Really love it.
8/13/2013 c14 15Nom Tasty
Me like! Just one problem though: you said in a previous chapter that the school started in September. Hogwarts start on the 1st, but yet he still has time. Is that right or have I just confused myself and misread something here? Otherwise, I really like this (and the fact that there is no massess of HP characters - tehe).
8/9/2013 c10 9Fuyutaro son
ok, i've read your review reply, and my reaction is:

*re-skims fic... get's to the VERY next chapter, and sees magic*... lol, of course, it pops up on the VERY next chapter after my rude rant... now i feel stupid. . Sorry about that. i really should have continued to skim the WHOLE thing before commenting. and even though, i should have been a lot less rude about it in my previous reviews. sorry about that. I shouldn't have been so rude going 'me no likie!'.

Now, about the first review, the one on chapter 2, i am both sticking with it, and i think i should explain what about it i felt made harry look stupid (though i think the cheesy lines are self-explanatory - 'i'm not down yet!'):

He saw someone time travel at the house, and yet he instantly assumes no magic was involved and that it must be a muggle tech thing without any evidence that muggle stuff was involved in it at all... I mean, if you saw that sort of thing, and you knew that time-travel was possible with magic, and you knew that muggles not only couldn't use time-travel, but also knew that they didn't even believe that time-travel was possible because you grew up in a muggle house hold, even if it was muggle based stuff (which i assume that it was), wouldn't you instantly say 'must be magic'?

Him instantly saying 'well, they look like muggles... so the time travel must be muggle based as well' just made no sense. while it might be true in this case (again, i THINK it is), to immediately jump to the conclusion that it's a muggle thing when everything looks like magic, that's not very smart... and then to run off without any form of help, and the fight scene from before... it sounded like more of a cheesy video game fight with all the lines 'I'm not down, yet','I'm ready for another round' and 'I'll get you this time!' sound like cheesy fight lines from those old arcade fighting games, the ones similar to mortal kombat.
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