for Intensity9/19/2011 c2 
5XxJasper'sAngelxX
that was just hilarious. i can't believe they had to go through the parental guilt about waiting to have kids
5XxJasper'sAngelxXthat was just hilarious. i can't believe they had to go through the parental guilt about waiting to have kids
9/19/2011 c2 2annabananaboo
Wow. Parental guilt- effin funny. I love this chapter! Keep up the great work!
2annabananabooWow. Parental guilt- effin funny. I love this chapter! Keep up the great work!
9/19/2011 c2 3BeastsRose23
six? omg! i thought it was pretty funny the way charlie and sue freaked out and started yelling at them!
3BeastsRose23six? omg! i thought it was pretty funny the way charlie and sue freaked out and started yelling at them!
9/19/2011 c2 2Siobhan Whitlock
I really enjoyed this chapter! I like the look into their lives pre-pack. Charlie and Sue harping on them about kids though... yikes! lol
I cant wait to see the packs explosive appearance! :)
2Siobhan WhitlockI really enjoyed this chapter! I like the look into their lives pre-pack. Charlie and Sue harping on them about kids though... yikes! lol
I cant wait to see the packs explosive appearance! :)
9/19/2011 c2 hlwareham
loved this chapter. i cant wait to see how the pack come back into their lives. i have a feeling it will be with a big bang. lol. update soon please. xx
loved this chapter. i cant wait to see how the pack come back into their lives. i have a feeling it will be with a big bang. lol. update soon please. xx
9/19/2011 c2 AccountKiller6189
Time sure did fly by! Ahaha!
And dang. If I were Charlie and Sue, I would've moved into the in-law apartment the moment Paul handed me the keys.. xD
Loved how Paul just bought a fridge just for his beer.
Time sure did fly by! Ahaha!
And dang. If I were Charlie and Sue, I would've moved into the in-law apartment the moment Paul handed me the keys.. xD
Loved how Paul just bought a fridge just for his beer.
9/18/2011 c2 froggyqueen
So Charlie and Sue know. Can't wait to see what the rest of the pack thinks lol
So Charlie and Sue know. Can't wait to see what the rest of the pack thinks lol
9/18/2011 c2 Princess Mishawaka
Oh I love this story too. Yes, I was surprised that Charlie and Sue came to spend time with Paul and Bella. Also that Charlie liked to golf? I really liked Paul surfing and Bella taking it all on camera.
So most of the pack is imprinted and have children. Now everybody will make Bella and Paul feel bad that thay haven't had kids. Hope they stay away from LaPush and have a life of their own but that wouldn't be any fun for us readers. SO bring on the pack.
Post soon. Love your writing.
Oh I love this story too. Yes, I was surprised that Charlie and Sue came to spend time with Paul and Bella. Also that Charlie liked to golf? I really liked Paul surfing and Bella taking it all on camera.
So most of the pack is imprinted and have children. Now everybody will make Bella and Paul feel bad that thay haven't had kids. Hope they stay away from LaPush and have a life of their own but that wouldn't be any fun for us readers. SO bring on the pack.
Post soon. Love your writing.