for Intensity9/18/2011 c2 froggyqueen
So Charlie and Sue know. Can't wait to see what the rest of the pack thinks lol
So Charlie and Sue know. Can't wait to see what the rest of the pack thinks lol
9/18/2011 c2 Princess Mishawaka
Oh I love this story too. Yes, I was surprised that Charlie and Sue came to spend time with Paul and Bella. Also that Charlie liked to golf? I really liked Paul surfing and Bella taking it all on camera.
So most of the pack is imprinted and have children. Now everybody will make Bella and Paul feel bad that thay haven't had kids. Hope they stay away from LaPush and have a life of their own but that wouldn't be any fun for us readers. SO bring on the pack.
Post soon. Love your writing.
Oh I love this story too. Yes, I was surprised that Charlie and Sue came to spend time with Paul and Bella. Also that Charlie liked to golf? I really liked Paul surfing and Bella taking it all on camera.
So most of the pack is imprinted and have children. Now everybody will make Bella and Paul feel bad that thay haven't had kids. Hope they stay away from LaPush and have a life of their own but that wouldn't be any fun for us readers. SO bring on the pack.
Post soon. Love your writing.
9/18/2011 c2 oohapoo
Trying to picture Charlie in golfing attire is funny. I almost spit my drink out picturing Paul with black socks and sandals going to a Luau. My husband just looked at me like I was losing my mind. The fridge for his beer was a live touch too! I like how you can make time pass naturally as well. Story pacing always drives me nuts, but you always manage to keep me entertained. Like bring back Jason and Tina also engaged...good stuff :)
Trying to picture Charlie in golfing attire is funny. I almost spit my drink out picturing Paul with black socks and sandals going to a Luau. My husband just looked at me like I was losing my mind. The fridge for his beer was a live touch too! I like how you can make time pass naturally as well. Story pacing always drives me nuts, but you always manage to keep me entertained. Like bring back Jason and Tina also engaged...good stuff :)
9/18/2011 c2 ellaryne
Love it. I know that this will be like your other stories pure entertainment. Can't wait for more
Love it. I know that this will be like your other stories pure entertainment. Can't wait for more
9/18/2011 c2 
8Elpis.97
Damn you parent guilt! Anyway when they have children it should be allllllll boys! Really good can't wait for more!
8Elpis.97Damn you parent guilt! Anyway when they have children it should be allllllll boys! Really good can't wait for more!
9/18/2011 c2 Emilymarie545
I really am enjoying this story so far! I cant wait to see how the rest of the pack finds our about Paul imprinting on Bella, I bet that will be hilarious. Please update soon!
I really am enjoying this story so far! I cant wait to see how the rest of the pack finds our about Paul imprinting on Bella, I bet that will be hilarious. Please update soon!
9/18/2011 c2 1alicefan32
Great chapter. I think it is hilarious that Leah imprinted on Eric Yorkie. Charlie and Sue were great.
1alicefan32Great chapter. I think it is hilarious that Leah imprinted on Eric Yorkie. Charlie and Sue were great.
9/18/2011 c2 19Luna Luce
You know I feel like I've official been pimped right? Honestly I thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a banner for such great stories. It's truly an honor. Anyway on to my review*dances around* I've got my fix, but now I want more. I love how he proposed it wasn't all extravangant it was just perfect so Bella and Paul. Hehe I love how the parents jumped down their throat about kids that was hilarious. I can't wait to see what the Pack does. Great chapter as always.
19Luna LuceYou know I feel like I've official been pimped right? Honestly I thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a banner for such great stories. It's truly an honor. Anyway on to my review*dances around* I've got my fix, but now I want more. I love how he proposed it wasn't all extravangant it was just perfect so Bella and Paul. Hehe I love how the parents jumped down their throat about kids that was hilarious. I can't wait to see what the Pack does. Great chapter as always.
9/18/2011 c2 TwilightFan888
LOVE IT! can NOT wait till the others come! lol
that chapter should be VERY interesting! please please please keep writing and write more soon!
XOXOXOXO
LOVE IT! can NOT wait till the others come! lol
that chapter should be VERY interesting! please please please keep writing and write more soon!
XOXOXOXO
9/18/2011 c2 8Sassy Mami
I hope they dont fall into the parental guilt. I agree that 40 is too much but we are talking about supernatural beings here so it wont too bad since they wont look a day over 26, Love the update. Cant wait to read more... is your schedule still once a week or will it change with 3 stories now instead of two?
8Sassy MamiI hope they dont fall into the parental guilt. I agree that 40 is too much but we are talking about supernatural beings here so it wont too bad since they wont look a day over 26, Love the update. Cant wait to read more... is your schedule still once a week or will it change with 3 stories now instead of two?