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4Little.Blonde.Chick
omg this chapter is so freckin good. yay im soo happy you did a wolf story i was hoping you would do one :)
4Little.Blonde.Chickomg this chapter is so freckin good. yay im soo happy you did a wolf story i was hoping you would do one :)
9/10/2011 c1 2Hisuiko
Hey Mama :)
Love the PoVs - great initial reaction from both to the imprint, and I love how you have shown their back stories without having to use a flashback sequence.
Great to see you writing new stories!
Hugs
Hissy
xxx
2HisuikoHey Mama :)
Love the PoVs - great initial reaction from both to the imprint, and I love how you have shown their back stories without having to use a flashback sequence.
Great to see you writing new stories!
Hugs
Hissy
xxx
9/10/2011 c1 Gaia-GoddessofEarth
Hello,
Just got back off holiday and I have been trying to look over the back log of all the updates I've missed. Well dome on the end of Life happens so just roll with it. The last part with the parents etc in heaven was a very good idea and the little bits explaining what they have done tied up the little lose ends. Anyway the oneshot you did was brilliant and I wish it was a multi chapter as I could really see it going far. Your new Paul/Bella fic looks really good and a fix that could help with your worries even though it hasn't been updated on a while is the healer by ace1014. Your story is a really good start but I'm just wondering where it's heading. I also love the fact that your using a Bella that has a backbone as some stories don't work that well without it. Good luck and I hope you are okay and had a nice holiday,
Goddessgeia
Hello,
Just got back off holiday and I have been trying to look over the back log of all the updates I've missed. Well dome on the end of Life happens so just roll with it. The last part with the parents etc in heaven was a very good idea and the little bits explaining what they have done tied up the little lose ends. Anyway the oneshot you did was brilliant and I wish it was a multi chapter as I could really see it going far. Your new Paul/Bella fic looks really good and a fix that could help with your worries even though it hasn't been updated on a while is the healer by ace1014. Your story is a really good start but I'm just wondering where it's heading. I also love the fact that your using a Bella that has a backbone as some stories don't work that well without it. Good luck and I hope you are okay and had a nice holiday,
Goddessgeia
9/10/2011 c1 10sammy55
I alwAys fhought Bella and Paul should be together. I love Paul he's my face wolf
10sammy55I alwAys fhought Bella and Paul should be together. I love Paul he's my face wolf
9/10/2011 c1 1nichellemarie
Personally it seems like everything went a little fast in the first chapter. I don't know, you probably did that on purpose to add to a later plot development or twist. Overall it's a good start.
1nichellemariePersonally it seems like everything went a little fast in the first chapter. I don't know, you probably did that on purpose to add to a later plot development or twist. Overall it's a good start.
9/10/2011 c1 diggthaat
I like it :) Paul is one of my fave wolves :P. There is swearing and sex in it two my fave things haha. can't wait for an update.
I like it :) Paul is one of my fave wolves :P. There is swearing and sex in it two my fave things haha. can't wait for an update.