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9/9/2011 c1 bookfreak25
Amazing first chapter love Paul & Bella can't wait to see the packs reaction and jakes a jackass Update Soon Please thx :)
9/9/2011 c1 Lexi Lightning
Loved it! But then again, anything you write is awesome so it's kind of a moot point there. Can't wait to find out what's next up for Paul and Bella!
9/9/2011 c1 Nonita
Very good start...I love Bella and Paul stories

How often do you plan to update the new stories?

When we have the next chapter of Walmart?

P.S. Excuse my barrage of questions.

Maribel
9/9/2011 c1 Mrs. Jim
WOW MAMA! LOL

Have to play some catch up on your other stories but saw that this was new so I decided to give it a look. Of course I'm not disappointed. It cracked me up. Poor Paul no phasing for so many years, he sees Bella and BLAM he needs to phase.

One thing I can just about always count on with you is sexin in the first chapter! LOL of course there will be problems later but by golly they will be together without the angst of having to figure out if they should be in the first place. I really do enjoy that about your stories though.

Anywho, can't wait to see where this goes. I'm definitely interested in your take on imprinting. It does seem rather intense.
9/9/2011 c1 TimeKeeperReaper
Don't be jittery this story sound likes it going to be amazing just like the rest of your stories. Update soon can't wait to find out what happens next.
9/9/2011 c1 feelingcowgirlish
Bravo! great fic for first time wolf fic! Love it so far! Cannot wait to see them rub it in jake's face
9/9/2011 c1 MissingDublin
I like it but I'm confused. Why didn't he imprint on her back in Forks? She should have kicked Angela's ass before she left Forks. What kind of friend is she or Jake for that matter?
9/9/2011 c1 Emilymarie545
Wow. I LOVE this story so far! Paul/Bella pairings are one of my favorites and I cant wait to read more!
9/9/2011 c1 Riley MacGyver523
Awesome start! I love Paul and Bella stories I can't wait to see what happens next please update again soon.
9/9/2011 c1 letsjustdance
OK..you hit me with a one-two punch today! Two new stories? You are just too much. I'm not usually a 'wolf-girl' but I wouldn't miss one of your great tales because of it..plus, so far, this is great! I'm in, again!
9/9/2011 c1 vampiremom1221
Lovin it so far but hey chick ya know I'm already a fan. Love that you picked Paul as your first wolf story. He's my favorite wolfboy. Can't wait for more.
9/9/2011 c1 slcottin
Hmmmm. Are Bella and Paul going to go back to Washington? That could be loads of fun. Can't wait to see where this goes...
9/9/2011 c1 1PaulIsaHAwttie
very interesting! It has my attention!
9/9/2011 c1 TawnyC
Terrific story, as usual. It doesn't seem to matter if you're writing about vampires or shape shifters, you can do it all! I love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
9/9/2011 c1 hlwareham
i love bella/paul stories and this one is no different. i cannot wait to see what adventures you send them on. will they be meeting back up with the pack or any cullens? i love all your stories so far. please update soon. xxx
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