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11/1/2014 c4 18Raigon
There is nothing wrong with your writing. People have problem reviewing for some stupid reason, but this is very good. I would have loved another chapter, but I take it that this is the end. Good Story ...very good.
9/10/2011 c4 5Amonraphoenix
Nothing to serious some spelling mistakes and grammar... I was kinda disappointed about the shortness of the story you could have gone into greater details; making the story longer and more suspenseful...

all in all I wish there was more :( but great fic :)

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