for Love of a Family8/18/2012 c2 Guest
oh please please please PLEASE continue! ever since first seeing the show as a kid (during the ancient egypt arc, no less) I couldn't help feeling like Atem was a father figure for Yugi, even if I haven't seen enough of the show to see anything else
oh please please please PLEASE continue! ever since first seeing the show as a kid (during the ancient egypt arc, no less) I couldn't help feeling like Atem was a father figure for Yugi, even if I haven't seen enough of the show to see anything else
8/14/2012 c2 Alligator Sky
WEll folks, I believe this is what they call "cavity inducing" because it's so sweet! I already adore this story.
WEll folks, I believe this is what they call "cavity inducing" because it's so sweet! I already adore this story.
8/3/2012 c2 
1yugioratemlover
YAY UPDATED! this is going to be really interesting. can't wait for more.
1yugioratemloverYAY UPDATED! this is going to be really interesting. can't wait for more.
8/1/2012 c2 5Star of Courage
*chuckles* dang girl. It's been FOREVER! thank you for FINALLY updating. :) Not a full-length story? *pouts* fiiiine. :p
Very cute chapter. I love Atem's reactions to "boy-toy" and being old. XD Yugi is so cute! X3
5Star of Courage*chuckles* dang girl. It's been FOREVER! thank you for FINALLY updating. :) Not a full-length story? *pouts* fiiiine. :p
Very cute chapter. I love Atem's reactions to "boy-toy" and being old. XD Yugi is so cute! X3
7/29/2012 c2 25Aqua Burst 7
God I can imagine how akward Yugi feels right now.
Though strangely, I more imagine Yugi and Yami as twins because they act like in the Jap anime and defantly in the manga.
Also I agree with you about the capsule monster arc. They focused on Yami too much. But again, there are so many other things wrong with that arc like Mokuba isn't in it even though he was the capsule monster champion in the manga, the fact everyone is out of character, the fact Alexander the Great is in it even though that makes no damn sense since he's a real person and I can't take him seriously any more, and oh yeah...WHY THE HELL IS THERE AN ANCIENT EGYPTIAN PYRIMAD IN THE MIDDLE OF INDIA!
I know when I write that arc in Welcome to my Bizzare Life I'm changing a ton like making Atem and Mahad (the aceint Mahad's reincarnate) travel to India to investigate Seth's pyramid in Egypt. Then they get sucked in due to a curse then Yugi, Mana (modern version), Marik, Remu (thief king), Ryou, Judai (Jaden's incarnate), heba (aceint Yugi like I mentioned before), Mokuba, Seto and aceint Mokuba go inside to rescue them. Trust me it'll be better then the origanal.
Still, I like how your changing at least some of that piece of shit arc for this story. Also, please, I'm begging you, don't make the pyramid in India or make Alexander the villain because those were the dumbest idea's ever.
25Aqua Burst 7God I can imagine how akward Yugi feels right now.
Though strangely, I more imagine Yugi and Yami as twins because they act like in the Jap anime and defantly in the manga.
Also I agree with you about the capsule monster arc. They focused on Yami too much. But again, there are so many other things wrong with that arc like Mokuba isn't in it even though he was the capsule monster champion in the manga, the fact everyone is out of character, the fact Alexander the Great is in it even though that makes no damn sense since he's a real person and I can't take him seriously any more, and oh yeah...WHY THE HELL IS THERE AN ANCIENT EGYPTIAN PYRIMAD IN THE MIDDLE OF INDIA!
I know when I write that arc in Welcome to my Bizzare Life I'm changing a ton like making Atem and Mahad (the aceint Mahad's reincarnate) travel to India to investigate Seth's pyramid in Egypt. Then they get sucked in due to a curse then Yugi, Mana (modern version), Marik, Remu (thief king), Ryou, Judai (Jaden's incarnate), heba (aceint Yugi like I mentioned before), Mokuba, Seto and aceint Mokuba go inside to rescue them. Trust me it'll be better then the origanal.
Still, I like how your changing at least some of that piece of shit arc for this story. Also, please, I'm begging you, don't make the pyramid in India or make Alexander the villain because those were the dumbest idea's ever.
7/29/2012 c1 Aqua Burst 7
I like how you used 3000 years ago, because I don't like the English dub that much. I find it interesting that Yugi's the reincarnate of Atem's child. In my stories I make Yami and Yugi twins in the past, and hell even in the present.
Though one thing that really annoys me in this is the fact you use Atem's name. In the anime if someone said his true name, it would resurect Zork since he used his name as a code to seal away that monster. So her using Yami's true name like that makes no sense.
I like how you used 3000 years ago, because I don't like the English dub that much. I find it interesting that Yugi's the reincarnate of Atem's child. In my stories I make Yami and Yugi twins in the past, and hell even in the present.
Though one thing that really annoys me in this is the fact you use Atem's name. In the anime if someone said his true name, it would resurect Zork since he used his name as a code to seal away that monster. So her using Yami's true name like that makes no sense.
1/31/2012 c1 1yugioratemlover
this was so cute and a really clever idea. i think you need to write more. i personaly want to know how this affects the rest of the story. and there are still parts that need to be explaned.
hope to read more. this is great.
1yugioratemloverthis was so cute and a really clever idea. i think you need to write more. i personaly want to know how this affects the rest of the story. and there are still parts that need to be explaned.
hope to read more. this is great.
11/29/2011 c1 The.Hush.Mona.Lisa
i love it. i'm not the only one they figured Atem had a queen. of course i have...complications when writing a story, such as a plot or an ending. but good job.
i love it. i'm not the only one they figured Atem had a queen. of course i have...complications when writing a story, such as a plot or an ending. but good job.
9/20/2011 c1 15MeliLouiseNorth
Poor Atem, he didn't know what was going on, love it.
Update soon please
15MeliLouiseNorthPoor Atem, he didn't know what was going on, love it.
Update soon please
9/11/2011 c1 5Breanna-Higurashi
Love this! Please continue! I want to see what Yugi's reaction will be!
5Breanna-HigurashiLove this! Please continue! I want to see what Yugi's reaction will be!