for This Sesshoumaru Doesn't Do Work10/4/2016 c11 Guest
Quite good. Laughing Elmo's two test tickles...hilarious! A belated congrats on your award too :)
I'd advise brushing up on your tenses and "would" though, as there were a quite lot of errors which were distracting. In all chapters, you used the Habitual Past "would" in situations that only happened once so cannot be habitual actions in the past (describing Sesshomaru's past mess ups at his work which all occurred once) so you should've used past simple tense. FYI.
Quite good. Laughing Elmo's two test tickles...hilarious! A belated congrats on your award too :)
I'd advise brushing up on your tenses and "would" though, as there were a quite lot of errors which were distracting. In all chapters, you used the Habitual Past "would" in situations that only happened once so cannot be habitual actions in the past (describing Sesshomaru's past mess ups at his work which all occurred once) so you should've used past simple tense. FYI.
1/1/2014 c11 Burningphoenix7
Me and my boyfriend started reading this and wet couldn't stop laughing! We loved this it was amazing! :-)
Me and my boyfriend started reading this and wet couldn't stop laughing! We loved this it was amazing! :-)
6/18/2012 c11 NaturalSam14
THIS. WAS. SO. FUNNY. I mean omg, I ws laughing so hard. My mother couldn't even tell if I was laughing or crying, becaus I was at it nonstop. Great Job. Fantatico. You did a great job! ;DDDDDDD
THIS. WAS. SO. FUNNY. I mean omg, I ws laughing so hard. My mother couldn't even tell if I was laughing or crying, becaus I was at it nonstop. Great Job. Fantatico. You did a great job! ;DDDDDDD
2/26/2012 c11 
2ZyiareHellsing
I will never get tired of this story! its just too funny! ( 2 thumbs up)
2ZyiareHellsingI will never get tired of this story! its just too funny! ( 2 thumbs up)
12/23/2011 c11 126Raven Silver Wolf
Sesshoumaru "Because little brother this Sesshoumaru doesn't do work" hilarious. I am going to miss f**king every job up Sesshy. This fic is a freakin comedy masterpiece, I will happily die laughing my ass off, love the ending, you have an epic sense of humor, and perfect writing skills keep up the amazing work, lol thanks (^_^)
Raven
126Raven Silver WolfSesshoumaru "Because little brother this Sesshoumaru doesn't do work" hilarious. I am going to miss f**king every job up Sesshy. This fic is a freakin comedy masterpiece, I will happily die laughing my ass off, love the ending, you have an epic sense of humor, and perfect writing skills keep up the amazing work, lol thanks (^_^)
Raven
12/22/2011 c11 16Shiori Mayonaka no Yume
what a tragic end...im going to miss sesshomaru and his retarded tail failing at the task, but succeeding to look good.
16Shiori Mayonaka no Yumewhat a tragic end...im going to miss sesshomaru and his retarded tail failing at the task, but succeeding to look good.
12/22/2011 c10 126Raven Silver Wolf
Sesshoumaru "He's banging her like a screen door in a hurricane" holy crap nearly died laughing. I knew would f*ck up royally, and he did not disappoint. this is to freaking hilarious, epic chap, lol thanks LMAO. Happy holidays (^_^)
Raven
126Raven Silver WolfSesshoumaru "He's banging her like a screen door in a hurricane" holy crap nearly died laughing. I knew would f*ck up royally, and he did not disappoint. this is to freaking hilarious, epic chap, lol thanks LMAO. Happy holidays (^_^)
Raven
12/11/2011 c9 Raven Silver Wolf
Test tickles, not testicles, hehehe that was so damn funny. This is the best story i have read in a long time, Lol thanks (^_^)
Raven
Test tickles, not testicles, hehehe that was so damn funny. This is the best story i have read in a long time, Lol thanks (^_^)
Raven
12/11/2011 c8 Raven Silver Wolf
Only Sesshoumaru could do that. Bu I do not blame him he deserves to get and take revenge, love this (^_^)
Raven
Only Sesshoumaru could do that. Bu I do not blame him he deserves to get and take revenge, love this (^_^)
Raven
12/11/2011 c5 Raven Silver Wolf
Inuyasha is a sick puppy, hehehe, love him to pieces. Sesshy telling his staff to give Inu his work for the day is priceless and the perfect revenge (^_^)
Raven
Inuyasha is a sick puppy, hehehe, love him to pieces. Sesshy telling his staff to give Inu his work for the day is priceless and the perfect revenge (^_^)
Raven
12/11/2011 c3 Raven Silver Wolf
Hehehe, Sessh made that sale, love how he went to the fools house (^_^)
Raven
Hehehe, Sessh made that sale, love how he went to the fools house (^_^)
Raven