for Impressions9/30/2011 c1 
13KJay99
Ha ha!
Very good story! I liked it. Nice perspective. I liked the way that you had Steve go through each team member. Even Leena!
Best line: "Artie had only shaken his head and muttered something incomprehensible before stomping off yelling about his glasses. Or possibly for his glasses. Or to his glasses. It was hard to say."
Made me giggle. I could almost picture Steve's head tilt and his eyes go all confused. :) Nice.
13KJay99Ha ha!
Very good story! I liked it. Nice perspective. I liked the way that you had Steve go through each team member. Even Leena!
Best line: "Artie had only shaken his head and muttered something incomprehensible before stomping off yelling about his glasses. Or possibly for his glasses. Or to his glasses. It was hard to say."
Made me giggle. I could almost picture Steve's head tilt and his eyes go all confused. :) Nice.
9/11/2011 c1 11AllyrienDM
Nice to see a take on "Jinksy"! I find myself really liking him - I would really like to see him stick around. But I felt that even more so with HG, and we all know how THAT turned out. Still... Anyways I for one would welcome more tales of the Jinks. ;)
11AllyrienDMNice to see a take on "Jinksy"! I find myself really liking him - I would really like to see him stick around. But I felt that even more so with HG, and we all know how THAT turned out. Still... Anyways I for one would welcome more tales of the Jinks. ;)