for Soldier Boy & Soldier Girl11/30/2017 c1 andrewpine
Is your very ,very soon promise is five yrs and counting .Will you ever finish this?
Is your very ,very soon promise is five yrs and counting .Will you ever finish this?
11/30/2017 c17 andrewpine
I'm curious if you have finished this on BiT and if so will you be completing it here? so the self-righteous. doctor and his insane mate were going to drag the family across country to try and save the soul of the they turned their back on,typical.
I'm curious if you have finished this on BiT and if so will you be completing it here? so the self-righteous. doctor and his insane mate were going to drag the family across country to try and save the soul of the they turned their back on,typical.
11/30/2017 c14 andrewpine
I always did wonder why they never did try the spray tan especially when they were forced to go to high school over and over by the idiot leaders of that screwed up coven.
I always did wonder why they never did try the spray tan especially when they were forced to go to high school over and over by the idiot leaders of that screwed up coven.
11/30/2017 c10 andrewpine
I Doubt that Mystic Meg missed the paper cut and the attack ? which one will she run into and way would they be in Forks if they ran from her? I don't know how many guys read your stories but I am one? just wondering if she doesn't care that much about giving head why does she have three stud in her tongue?
I Doubt that Mystic Meg missed the paper cut and the attack ? which one will she run into and way would they be in Forks if they ran from her? I don't know how many guys read your stories but I am one? just wondering if she doesn't care that much about giving head why does she have three stud in her tongue?
11/29/2017 c4 andrewpine
so she shit in Jasper's lap then warped out of there before he could do anything to her?
so she shit in Jasper's lap then warped out of there before he could do anything to her?
11/29/2017 c3 andrewpine
The only thing I want to see is Eddie is going up in smoke .so once they hook up what will he do about her going on her deployments? is he going with her Or will he be faking her death and turning her? shame they weren't real vamps she could just pass for human and keep doing what she does best.
The only thing I want to see is Eddie is going up in smoke .so once they hook up what will he do about her going on her deployments? is he going with her Or will he be faking her death and turning her? shame they weren't real vamps she could just pass for human and keep doing what she does best.
11/29/2017 c2 andrewpine
You do know it's cheek not check.a check is what you write and a cheek is what you caress .so she has been carrying a torch for the Major for eight yrs. I am pretty sure what he saw and felt that night was Alice trying to kill off Bella to keep him away from his mate.
You do know it's cheek not check.a check is what you write and a cheek is what you caress .so she has been carrying a torch for the Major for eight yrs. I am pretty sure what he saw and felt that night was Alice trying to kill off Bella to keep him away from his mate.
11/29/2017 c1 andrewpine
Curious are you ever going to finish this or will you be leaving all of your readers hanging until they get tired of waiting and remove it from their favorites list and move on?
Curious are you ever going to finish this or will you be leaving all of your readers hanging until they get tired of waiting and remove it from their favorites list and move on?
10/11/2017 c18 Lostred Rose J
Either way it takes a lot of courage to put it up here for all of us to read and pass ourjudgement. So be proud of yourself for that! Thanks for writing and sharing!
(PS the rest of this Pm can be found as a review for chp 19
Either way it takes a lot of courage to put it up here for all of us to read and pass ourjudgement. So be proud of yourself for that! Thanks for writing and sharing!
(PS the rest of this Pm can be found as a review for chp 19
10/11/2017 c19 Lostred Rose J
You really got something here with this storyline!
Its a bit offputting that there are so many grammatical errors and wrong words like check instead of cheek, maybe a beta could help yuo out with that.
Either way it takes a lot of
You really got something here with this storyline!
Its a bit offputting that there are so many grammatical errors and wrong words like check instead of cheek, maybe a beta could help yuo out with that.
Either way it takes a lot of
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