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3/6/2019 c4 TeamEricNSookie
SPOILER ALERT
Great story... Weird her grandchildren will be older than her own child!
SPOILER ALERT
Great story... Weird her grandchildren will be older than her own child!
10/31/2014 c4 gruen
I recently found your work, and enjoyed it immensely. I tried to link over to your WordPress and off web site, but found they expired earlier this month. Will you be renewing them? I hope so.
I recently found your work, and enjoyed it immensely. I tried to link over to your WordPress and off web site, but found they expired earlier this month. Will you be renewing them? I hope so.
10/13/2013 c1 Vwchick
Loved this one too! I was so wanting to know how Eric and Sookie's children would turn out. That is very cool. Do you have any outages about the children growing up or maybe Pam babysitting? Or Auntie Indria? It would be so neat to see how they dealt with children. Anyway love your stories and your writing. Thanks for going to all that hard work!
Loved this one too! I was so wanting to know how Eric and Sookie's children would turn out. That is very cool. Do you have any outages about the children growing up or maybe Pam babysitting? Or Auntie Indria? It would be so neat to see how they dealt with children. Anyway love your stories and your writing. Thanks for going to all that hard work!
8/2/2013 c4
1jules3677
Yes i cried. I cried for the first two chapters. That was so sad. But now I know you can write absolute tragedy & happy ever after. There is always an upside! Very nicely written. The children were nicely scripted. Thankyou.
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Yes i cried. I cried for the first two chapters. That was so sad. But now I know you can write absolute tragedy & happy ever after. There is always an upside! Very nicely written. The children were nicely scripted. Thankyou.
5/25/2012 c4 Honulvr
I don't tend to be a crier in general, but these stories where Sookie is dying and refuses to be turned... I don't cry with these because they simply perturb me to no end. I know everyone has their own right to choose, but I watched a friend be forced to die and leave her husband and kids behind (yes due to cancer) and I had a good friend that lost his mom when we were in 6th grade to cancer and my father lost his mother when he was 11 to cancer. If any of them would have had the option... it's the fight that seems to count to the kids, from what I can tell, if the mom fights to the end, the kids seem to be able to deal. If the mom doesn't exhaust every option (man I had a friend in high school that I've since lost touch with, but I think he is still pissed at his mother and definitely told her that when he was drinking and drugging himself into oblivion) So the thing is, if she had the choice to be turned and simply didn't take it because she was afraid she would be uncontrollable then that only makes me angry. It is very nice and happy that her family went one step further and made her a cluviel dor, but she shouldn't have made that necessary. Maybe I just don't understand or get it because I've had to watch from the outside, but I don't understand how she would force Eric to live without her knowing she could choose to stay. I admit that I do not understand, but I'm pretty attached to the idea of fighting when you have so many people to live for (or exist as the undead for). And this in no way is a comment about your fantastic writing or your idea. I love your story and your way of solving Sookie's stubborn behavior (yes, it is very much a Sookie way of doing things you have her character down pat). I think that your writing is fantastic, I just always get a little angry when Sookie remains stubborn in the face of death and 90% of me wants to yell at Eric to change her anyway of course the other 10% realizes that her stubbornness will not die with her mortal life and I would wager it would take her a good 300 years to even begin to think about forgiving him for that. Anyway, I'm going to check out your other stories because I love your writing.
I don't tend to be a crier in general, but these stories where Sookie is dying and refuses to be turned... I don't cry with these because they simply perturb me to no end. I know everyone has their own right to choose, but I watched a friend be forced to die and leave her husband and kids behind (yes due to cancer) and I had a good friend that lost his mom when we were in 6th grade to cancer and my father lost his mother when he was 11 to cancer. If any of them would have had the option... it's the fight that seems to count to the kids, from what I can tell, if the mom fights to the end, the kids seem to be able to deal. If the mom doesn't exhaust every option (man I had a friend in high school that I've since lost touch with, but I think he is still pissed at his mother and definitely told her that when he was drinking and drugging himself into oblivion) So the thing is, if she had the choice to be turned and simply didn't take it because she was afraid she would be uncontrollable then that only makes me angry. It is very nice and happy that her family went one step further and made her a cluviel dor, but she shouldn't have made that necessary. Maybe I just don't understand or get it because I've had to watch from the outside, but I don't understand how she would force Eric to live without her knowing she could choose to stay. I admit that I do not understand, but I'm pretty attached to the idea of fighting when you have so many people to live for (or exist as the undead for). And this in no way is a comment about your fantastic writing or your idea. I love your story and your way of solving Sookie's stubborn behavior (yes, it is very much a Sookie way of doing things you have her character down pat). I think that your writing is fantastic, I just always get a little angry when Sookie remains stubborn in the face of death and 90% of me wants to yell at Eric to change her anyway of course the other 10% realizes that her stubbornness will not die with her mortal life and I would wager it would take her a good 300 years to even begin to think about forgiving him for that. Anyway, I'm going to check out your other stories because I love your writing.