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10/26/2011 c1 74SupernaturalGeek
That was incredibly touching without ever being over the top or taking either of them out of character.

Poor Roy and poor Hughes too, having to see his best friend in so much pain and being helpless to stop it.

Knowing what eventually happens with Hughes meant the last few words were horribly bittersweet but I really enjoyed the story nonetheless.
9/16/2011 c1 66NinthFeather
I love this...your Plot Bunny of Doom turned out so much better than mine. Maes and Roy's friendship is one of the most underappreciated relationships in FMA and I really like how well you expressed it in here. Also, you're quite good at writing in Maes's voice. You can feel proud of this one, I think.
9/14/2011 c1 12Shandrial
I'm such a sucker for Roy/Maes stories of any kind. And this was a well written one. I love your Maes in this, he has the right amount of friendliness, control, and sternness the character requires. Nicely written. It's always a pleasure to find a good Roy/Maes story. My only complaint is that it's a one shot! lol

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