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for My Lion King III Simbas pride and the next gen

2/29/2012 c19 DJ
Dude

great job on chapter loved how that brat thought the lions think it s money lol

Great comedy. but over all good work
2/29/2012 c19 5
i didnt like it no not at all. had nothing important
2/27/2012 c18 72Vitani825
Another great chapter. I am lookig forward to reading when Kovu and Kiara become parents.
2/24/2012 c18 178Lavenderpaw
pilots, cringing and Reid oh my!
2/24/2012 c18 1x-The Devil's Advocate-x
Despite this being your hardest chapter to write, you certainly did a great job on it. :)

Okay, I'm hating the poachers more and more by the moment. Ugh, they give me the creeps! I'm so glad you and Reid were able to warn the pride. That's great! :D Aw, Kovu and Kiara are really cute together. I liked the "pursuing" line. hehe

Great work and I'm looking forwards to the next chapter soon!
2/24/2012 c18 60Villains' Bad Girl
wow, so the hyenas teamed up with the poachers? lol you and Nala. so cute and funny since you're flirting right in front of Simba
2/24/2012 c18 DJ
Jonny way to go dude.

You and Nala getting to gether. Nice. ;)
2/24/2012 c18 5
snake aligator
2/24/2012 c18 64BroadwayFanGirl91
Okay you made me choke on my breakfast shake when I read about the hyena with a Mexican accent! Choke with laughter that is... If I end up coughing it up all over my laptop I'm blaming you! xDDD lol

Good chapter btw... can't wait for more.
2/23/2012 c17 1x-The Devil's Advocate-x
Okay, I finally caught up! lol Anyways, very nice work on this whole story. Your writing style is great and every chapter is interesting! Anyways, I really hate poachers. -_- I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. :)
2/20/2012 c17 1Fewtch
Uh oh, those poachers are bad news. :s

An those two guys at the beginning are complete morons. XD
2/20/2012 c17 64BroadwayFanGirl91
Lions playing blackjack? ? ? Now I've heard and seen it all... lol

Way to go Jonny, can't wait for more. :)
2/20/2012 c17 DJ
Hey johnny:

I liked the part where the lions played balkjack for the first time.

The one part I didint like was this part were you OC Breat has gas on him instead of chrliform cause casue would have noked everyone out. wheres liquid cholirphorm would have been beter.
2/20/2012 c17 5
oh look theres a window
2/19/2012 c17 3Starzinmieyez
Haha, that's why you don't swing cameras around XD And I love the idea of lions playing cards :'D Haha!
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