4/27/2018 c1 moonprincess97524
I love this wonderful story. The way that you explained the way that Luna is "different" is wonderful. I love that those that were bulling Luna were punished. I hope that you consider one day writing a sequel.
I love this wonderful story. The way that you explained the way that Luna is "different" is wonderful. I love that those that were bulling Luna were punished. I hope that you consider one day writing a sequel.
4/5/2018 c1 2trekkifulron
I like this story mostly because how different it is. Good job writing this
I like this story mostly because how different it is. Good job writing this
2/17/2018 c1 Bountyhunter1977
Love this one shot. it has just about everything i like in it. to bad there is not more.
Love this one shot. it has just about everything i like in it. to bad there is not more.
1/30/2018 c1 1AchillesTheGeek
“It turned out to be longer than I wanted it to be, and not as humorous as I wanted it to be.”
I think it’s delightful and wish it were longer!
“It turned out to be longer than I wanted it to be, and not as humorous as I wanted it to be.”
I think it’s delightful and wish it were longer!
1/21/2018 c1 Sam
Just found this but really enjoyed it!
Just found this but really enjoyed it!
1/10/2018 c1 becmah
Bobmin (RIP) sent me here with his recommendation after one of the chapters. I must admit, seriously good one-shot and I love the idea of this spin on Lunas' powers. Good work.
Bobmin (RIP) sent me here with his recommendation after one of the chapters. I must admit, seriously good one-shot and I love the idea of this spin on Lunas' powers. Good work.
12/7/2017 c1 UserABC123
I really like the plot here that centers around Luna Lovegood. Thanks for the great story!
I really like the plot here that centers around Luna Lovegood. Thanks for the great story!
11/4/2017 c1 Guest
Unfortunately, it became a stereotypical bashing fic which overshadowed it's otherwise brilliant premise and start.
Unfortunately, it became a stereotypical bashing fic which overshadowed it's otherwise brilliant premise and start.
11/4/2017 c1 Guest
The fic deserves major praise for being creative. I would have liked it better if it had limited itself to the changes directly caused by the addition of Luna and her father. Instead, after the first half it quickly became very AU with characters acting nothing like in canon. It started with a brilliant idea and then went overboard on all changes.
The fic deserves major praise for being creative. I would have liked it better if it had limited itself to the changes directly caused by the addition of Luna and her father. Instead, after the first half it quickly became very AU with characters acting nothing like in canon. It started with a brilliant idea and then went overboard on all changes.
9/23/2017 c1 Guest
This was a fun and enjoyable read. Thankyou for sharing and writing it.
This was a fun and enjoyable read. Thankyou for sharing and writing it.