for When Is It a Contract9/15/2011 c1 dmn410
I absolutely loved this story. I enjoy stories where someone wakes up to the ridiculous manipulations of AB and puts him down.
Your story is well written and humorous. Great job.
I absolutely loved this story. I enjoy stories where someone wakes up to the ridiculous manipulations of AB and puts him down.
Your story is well written and humorous. Great job.
9/15/2011 c1 everpresent
Yup, a few errors here and there, typos mostly.
But none of that detracts from what is a delightful, convoluted, innovative story. Great fun! I've never heard of the notion of a "question-teller", which is a great invention.
The style of writing is challenging. They way you skip most of the exposition and stick with just conversations, almost exclusively, is not something I'm used to. I don't think I could handle it on a very long story, but it is okay here.
thanks for sharing.
Yup, a few errors here and there, typos mostly.
But none of that detracts from what is a delightful, convoluted, innovative story. Great fun! I've never heard of the notion of a "question-teller", which is a great invention.
The style of writing is challenging. They way you skip most of the exposition and stick with just conversations, almost exclusively, is not something I'm used to. I don't think I could handle it on a very long story, but it is okay here.
thanks for sharing.
9/15/2011 c1 ep
excellente fic
a+
excellente fic
a+
9/15/2011 c1 Daenin
I enjoyed "When Is It a Contract" very much. Luna's character is wonderful. I also like how you had things arranged so Minerva was confronted with her not fulfilling her duties. The entire story is awesome. Thank you for sharing it!
I enjoyed "When Is It a Contract" very much. Luna's character is wonderful. I also like how you had things arranged so Minerva was confronted with her not fulfilling her duties. The entire story is awesome. Thank you for sharing it!
9/14/2011 c1 Cassandra30
I like it! I would like to know what Luna told them to do to get rid of LV as well! any chance of that story getting written?
I like it! I would like to know what Luna told them to do to get rid of LV as well! any chance of that story getting written?
9/14/2011 c1 haphazard1
This was a very interesting variation on fourth year canon. I especially liked the ideas about the Lovegood family and their abilities.
This was a very interesting variation on fourth year canon. I especially liked the ideas about the Lovegood family and their abilities.
9/14/2011 c1 sparky40sw
What an excellent and wonderful novella.
1st a real and plausible reason for the incongrous answers that Luna gives, and a way to work around it for someone with caring and compassion.
2nd - a truly beautiful answer to the question, how do we ditch the walking stomach that Ron has become - he was a normal 11 yr old in canon 1st year, little changed but less nice 2nd, and utterly stupid with the flying car - one cannot blame his attitudes on brain damage from the crash into the willow without reversing the causality.
3rd year he is a prat, and down right horrid about his rat - good riddance
thanks for a caring, competent adult in your characterization of Amelia.
you are a genuine artist writer, and each of your works is a treasure.
thanks so much for sharing.
What an excellent and wonderful novella.
1st a real and plausible reason for the incongrous answers that Luna gives, and a way to work around it for someone with caring and compassion.
2nd - a truly beautiful answer to the question, how do we ditch the walking stomach that Ron has become - he was a normal 11 yr old in canon 1st year, little changed but less nice 2nd, and utterly stupid with the flying car - one cannot blame his attitudes on brain damage from the crash into the willow without reversing the causality.
3rd year he is a prat, and down right horrid about his rat - good riddance
thanks for a caring, competent adult in your characterization of Amelia.
you are a genuine artist writer, and each of your works is a treasure.
thanks so much for sharing.
9/14/2011 c1 
44dennisud
That was a good read! You build up the suspense yet as we went we knew what was coming! Like the quartet here and the dynamic here too!
Still you leave us with them in the western U.S. and voldy moldy still fluttering along.
Would like to see more of this story line!
dennisud
44dennisudThat was a good read! You build up the suspense yet as we went we knew what was coming! Like the quartet here and the dynamic here too!
Still you leave us with them in the western U.S. and voldy moldy still fluttering along.
Would like to see more of this story line!
dennisud
9/14/2011 c1 Zamia
That was bloody excellent. More power to Luna & Amelia. One can just picture a wimpy Dumbles - I'll pay you Tuesday for a dozen lemon drops today. Quite a nice little coven Harry is starting. Would like to see it when Daphne gets invited. One question Harry should have asked Luna was what are next Saturday night's Lotto numbers? Good one. Cheers.
Z
That was bloody excellent. More power to Luna & Amelia. One can just picture a wimpy Dumbles - I'll pay you Tuesday for a dozen lemon drops today. Quite a nice little coven Harry is starting. Would like to see it when Daphne gets invited. One question Harry should have asked Luna was what are next Saturday night's Lotto numbers? Good one. Cheers.
Z
9/14/2011 c1 9jacee2u
well, i for one, am thrilled that this plot-jackalope snuck up on you. this was a wonderful story, and i loved every bit of it. it may not have been humorous, but the plot was good, the characterization was great, and the writing was excellent.
i apologize for the lack of capitalization, but i'm writing this on a phone, and it's a lot of hassle to get it spelled right with fat thumbs, much less punctuated clearly!
thank you very much for sharing this piece of work.
Jacee
9jacee2uwell, i for one, am thrilled that this plot-jackalope snuck up on you. this was a wonderful story, and i loved every bit of it. it may not have been humorous, but the plot was good, the characterization was great, and the writing was excellent.
i apologize for the lack of capitalization, but i'm writing this on a phone, and it's a lot of hassle to get it spelled right with fat thumbs, much less punctuated clearly!
thank you very much for sharing this piece of work.
Jacee
9/14/2011 c1 68red-jacobson
Nicely done, and I like the way you set up a possible sequel. I wasn't surprised to see Hermione and Luna with Harry here, considering your other stories, but I was pleasantly surprised with Susan's appearance.
Thanks for sharing this, and I hope you find some more of this story to tell
red
68red-jacobsonNicely done, and I like the way you set up a possible sequel. I wasn't surprised to see Hermione and Luna with Harry here, considering your other stories, but I was pleasantly surprised with Susan's appearance.
Thanks for sharing this, and I hope you find some more of this story to tell
red
9/14/2011 c1 that1
... not as humorous as ...
It was a fun story any which way you slice it.
I can see taking this one several different ways in a longer fic.
Good job, keep it up!
... not as humorous as ...
It was a fun story any which way you slice it.
I can see taking this one several different ways in a longer fic.
Good job, keep it up!