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11/10/2011 c2 Queensarrow
hmmm... the first one I could accept as a one shot, the lack of "flesh" and it being mostly dialog helped for that. Not that it being a one shot is bad, in fact it's interesting and pretty good writing, since I could easily see the characters acting without being told or shown.

The second one begs for a sequel and Puumura. Which I hope to see soon.
11/10/2011 c2 5NONAMESWEREAVAILABLE
It does read a bit better now. :D
10/10/2011 c1 NONAMESWEREAVAILABLE
I didn't know what was going on here, but it is pretty good. I've been waiting for someone to do a HetaOni/PMMM crossover, I knew one was bound to happen eventually. XD
9/15/2011 c1 32Shiroi Iyasu
The only thing that made me look at it was Italy.

ITTTTTTTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAALY. TT ARGH, HetaOni still makes me cry no matter how many times I watch it. The dialogue was a bit confusing, but I got how everything went to an extent I suppose.

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