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10/26/2011 c1 Anonymous
This is REALLY good. Keep it up. In the beginning, I would have written it:

"No, no, no, no, DEFINITELY no, um, NO. Why aren't there any good books anymore? What's with people?"

Or something like that. I don't know. I really liked this though. You should probably add more commas, and put more into what Kitty's thinking. Just a little though. Not much. Keep it up!
10/13/2011 c1 12Raven34link
cool

where did Kitty find it? i'm sure Rogue wouldn't leave something as important as that just laying around

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