for Why Me!6/4/2012 c2 HI
Awesome story please update
Awesome story please update
1/30/2012 c2 
8FabulousFever
much better than the first chapter, still had a few mistakes but you really showed the initiative to improve. i like where the story is going and i'm rather excited to see what romantic encounters they will be having. keep up the good work
8FabulousFevermuch better than the first chapter, still had a few mistakes but you really showed the initiative to improve. i like where the story is going and i'm rather excited to see what romantic encounters they will be having. keep up the good work
1/21/2012 c1 8FabulousFever
a little OOC but the general idea was pretty good. it seemed just a smidge-bit rushed. i would like to see more development on the 'vision' that rogue had. good work, and don't forget to proof read 3 times to catch those tiny little grammar errors
8FabulousFevera little OOC but the general idea was pretty good. it seemed just a smidge-bit rushed. i would like to see more development on the 'vision' that rogue had. good work, and don't forget to proof read 3 times to catch those tiny little grammar errors
9/21/2011 c1 ALLREMS
Nice chapter! Good plot with how they met and how rogue is having visions. Only I'm thinking remy is still in a depressed shock since he seems kinda slow not at all the clever passionate quick-witted gambit I think should be like but like I said this could just be my 1st impression an change in upcoming chapters. It will also be interesting to see if rogue will be able to recall more powers as she absorbs more mutants or if she will be "cured" and thus read human to beast&xavier.
Nice chapter! Good plot with how they met and how rogue is having visions. Only I'm thinking remy is still in a depressed shock since he seems kinda slow not at all the clever passionate quick-witted gambit I think should be like but like I said this could just be my 1st impression an change in upcoming chapters. It will also be interesting to see if rogue will be able to recall more powers as she absorbs more mutants or if she will be "cured" and thus read human to beast&xavier.