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1/18/2016 c1 9That Artist Girl
please continue
10/30/2014 c1 4Channie.B
Good chapter. Would prefer longer ones though. Please continue!
3/31/2014 c1 15xDeathAngelx
More more and more
9/2/2013 c1 Veil793
Its good so far. please continue writing I would like to see what happens.
11/20/2012 c1 nobody
ohhhhh, nice. i take it takes place in mew moon. anyway me like, but if she has bella why would she want to contiune building an army or for that matter why would she build an army if Lanarts or... what's his name? ... would come back from finding bella all alone? if you want you could do the story from the point of view that Victoria found bella too easy and so she wants a more "fufilling" revenge. this is just a suggestion because i think that you hit on the real big "What if?" in new moon for alot of people. keep on writing.
10/26/2012 c1 VampireMania101
Continue, so short but the main idea looks cool.
4/5/2012 c1 JazzyJluvsbooks
it was epic
1/20/2012 c1 Zoidsfan1
I f you make Bella get powers give her power over elements, teleport, mind reading, telepathy, and psychic
11/4/2011 c1 StarsRhys
I like the fast pace. Definitely keep this up!
10/30/2011 c1 2NerdyChick66
i Love it so far! Please keep going!
9/20/2011 c1 2Emerau
Are you serious, you just don't stop a story if they don't review. And please can you try to do longer chapters.

Keep going.

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