for Hadrian Black9/9/2024 c6 Guest
For a story that goes nowhere and is dead you might want to take it down.
For a story that goes nowhere and is dead you might want to take it down.
75/18/2022 c6 Lord.Revan.T
It always pains me to find a good fic that has been abandoned. For what it's worth I really liked the premise.
It always pains me to find a good fic that has been abandoned. For what it's worth I really liked the premise.
3/5/2022 c6 Johnsmythe4059
This one of the better HP fanfics I've read since I started reading fanfics.
It's truly a shame that you don't continue with the fic
This one of the better HP fanfics I've read since I started reading fanfics.
It's truly a shame that you don't continue with the fic
4/25/2021 c6 Guest
So wished you had finushed this. So twisted. So good.
So wished you had finushed this. So twisted. So good.
1/24/2021 c6 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
1/24/2021 c6 Guest
Please update
Please update
11/5/2020 c4 Guest
Neville? What an awful fanfic Lol quit writing
Neville? What an awful fanfic Lol quit writing
10/20/2020 c6 Guest
Please update
Please update
9/14/2019 c1 Skely21
I like the story so far despite harry being a bit to OP (don't get me wrong I'd rather him strong than weak), I hope this story hasn't been abandoned as I'm interested in the differences of the world's, relationships beginning, and how characters will evolve (concerning their personalities) with age. I assume time skips will play a huge role now, so I'm wondering what you will include and how others will start to join the main cast. One piece of advice character building is essential, I imagine the movie cast when I read so the dialogue has to be at least believable and so far you're succeeding.
I like the story so far despite harry being a bit to OP (don't get me wrong I'd rather him strong than weak), I hope this story hasn't been abandoned as I'm interested in the differences of the world's, relationships beginning, and how characters will evolve (concerning their personalities) with age. I assume time skips will play a huge role now, so I'm wondering what you will include and how others will start to join the main cast. One piece of advice character building is essential, I imagine the movie cast when I read so the dialogue has to be at least believable and so far you're succeeding.
6/20/2019 c4 Guest
Pretty good until the Neville bit... he is 5, I'm not sure he would be so logical or mature in his reasoning or revenge
Pretty good until the Neville bit... he is 5, I'm not sure he would be so logical or mature in his reasoning or revenge
3/16/2018 c6 sheleg15sbc.edu
Interesting start to a story and one I haven't seen before. I hope you would consider writing more one day.
Interesting start to a story and one I haven't seen before. I hope you would consider writing more one day.