for Love's Past11/21/2011 c1 nomad
that was a good story.Felt a little OOC but all in all it was a good read. and given the fact that i am a strong supporter of NaruHina that was a pretty high praise.
that was a good story.Felt a little OOC but all in all it was a good read. and given the fact that i am a strong supporter of NaruHina that was a pretty high praise.
9/25/2011 c1 
5Tardy-Typewriter
This was awesome and in all honesty the only thing wrong was that you Spelt wrong inyour A/N, but in all honesty really well written story :D loved it
5Tardy-TypewriterThis was awesome and in all honesty the only thing wrong was that you Spelt wrong inyour A/N, but in all honesty really well written story :D loved it
9/21/2011 c1 Uhhh. Did I miss something
Since when does Naruto have, "jet-black hair spiked in all directions?"
This is a bit OCC, though I think you tried to keep it from being so. Overall, it was a fun read, but it could do with some editing.
~jsm
Since when does Naruto have, "jet-black hair spiked in all directions?"
This is a bit OCC, though I think you tried to keep it from being so. Overall, it was a fun read, but it could do with some editing.
~jsm