for Until Death Do Us Part4/19/2022 c1 Darth Tenibris2
Yeah so why are degenerate freaks like you allowed to exist? I think it's a good indication that there is no god if absolute filth like you are allowed to roam free.
The world would be a better place if you had never existed at all.
Yeah so why are degenerate freaks like you allowed to exist? I think it's a good indication that there is no god if absolute filth like you are allowed to roam free.
The world would be a better place if you had never existed at all.
7/28/2019 c5 solitare1
I actually screamed when I got to the end of this chapter, Why haven't you been back? This story definitely needs to be written I have got to know the end of it.
I actually screamed when I got to the end of this chapter, Why haven't you been back? This story definitely needs to be written I have got to know the end of it.
6/9/2015 c5 narutofan
please oh please UPDATE SOOOOON! onegaishimasu!
please oh please UPDATE SOOOOON! onegaishimasu!
1/9/2015 c5 
7angelxdevilspawn
Hi Guest who feels Hinata and Sakura cheating on their husbands happened too fast :). Thank you for your feedback. As far as your concerns go, dont worry, let the story unfold. All the characters have their own rich story lines and their stories will be told in due course of time. There are not bad guys, they're all just victims of fate as you'll come to know in the following chapters. But yes, since my lead characters are Naruto and Sasuke their story will always be the central plot line. Sasuke has been silent so far actually, we haven't seen anything from his perspective but we're soon going to. So just keep reading on :)
7angelxdevilspawnHi Guest who feels Hinata and Sakura cheating on their husbands happened too fast :). Thank you for your feedback. As far as your concerns go, dont worry, let the story unfold. All the characters have their own rich story lines and their stories will be told in due course of time. There are not bad guys, they're all just victims of fate as you'll come to know in the following chapters. But yes, since my lead characters are Naruto and Sasuke their story will always be the central plot line. Sasuke has been silent so far actually, we haven't seen anything from his perspective but we're soon going to. So just keep reading on :)
1/9/2015 c5 Guest
Wow, so many twists and turns and in just 5 chapters! I like the fact that the story doesn't drag things out and that there is a lot of plot, but I also think there were a few things that happened maybe a bit too quickly. Like Hinata sleeping with Neji. When we first saw Neji and Hinata, she was happy with Naruto and had no idea that Neji's remarks about Naruto were because he was jealous of their relationship. (I'm assuming this must have been the case.) The next thing we know, she's breaking up with Naruto and has gotten pregnant by Neji. When did this happen? Why did it happen? Similarly, Sakura sleeping with Kiba. Until Naruto found them together, I had no idea Sakura was even still friends with him, let alone would ever consider sleeping with him. Sakura and Hinata are just side characters, so we don't need to know as much about them as we do about Naruto and Sasuke, but I also think a little more context would help when it comes to important plot twists, such as Hinata and Sakura both turning into cheaters. Other than that, this fic is great and I can't wait for more chapters!
Wow, so many twists and turns and in just 5 chapters! I like the fact that the story doesn't drag things out and that there is a lot of plot, but I also think there were a few things that happened maybe a bit too quickly. Like Hinata sleeping with Neji. When we first saw Neji and Hinata, she was happy with Naruto and had no idea that Neji's remarks about Naruto were because he was jealous of their relationship. (I'm assuming this must have been the case.) The next thing we know, she's breaking up with Naruto and has gotten pregnant by Neji. When did this happen? Why did it happen? Similarly, Sakura sleeping with Kiba. Until Naruto found them together, I had no idea Sakura was even still friends with him, let alone would ever consider sleeping with him. Sakura and Hinata are just side characters, so we don't need to know as much about them as we do about Naruto and Sasuke, but I also think a little more context would help when it comes to important plot twists, such as Hinata and Sakura both turning into cheaters. Other than that, this fic is great and I can't wait for more chapters!
1/8/2015 c5 Guest
I love this story. It's well written and entertaining. Can't wait to read some more.
I love this story. It's well written and entertaining. Can't wait to read some more.
1/8/2015 c5 Onobaby
I am so in love with this story! I am wondering if all three have the same STD haha! Awkward!
I am so in love with this story! I am wondering if all three have the same STD haha! Awkward!
1/8/2015 c5 solitare1
Yep, saw that semi coming. Not the pregnant part, the relationship part. Still loving this story.
Yep, saw that semi coming. Not the pregnant part, the relationship part. Still loving this story.
1/7/2015 c4 1dieanneace
Oh please please please continue this freaking awesome story. I can cry if you dont pleaseeee
1dieanneaceOh please please please continue this freaking awesome story. I can cry if you dont pleaseeee
1/6/2015 c1 luge
heyy fag, where is the comments go? khe xD
heyy fag, where is the comments go? khe xD