
7/14/2021 c1 Guest
Dude, i adored this one-shot. so well written. beautiful and not corny. congrats
Dude, i adored this one-shot. so well written. beautiful and not corny. congrats
4/14/2021 c1 Cheese
You are weird.
You are weird.
2/20/2018 c1
9yingyanggirl
This is a great fic and a real tragedy that your other fic is lost because it sounds like it would have been a real gift to the world of fanfiction. I am curious as to how your flashdrive got destroyed.

This is a great fic and a real tragedy that your other fic is lost because it sounds like it would have been a real gift to the world of fanfiction. I am curious as to how your flashdrive got destroyed.
1/1/2016 c1 bbraedpsam4ever
Amazing! Its the best talk and relationships between boys and girls! I just I'm in love with every detail and word! And sensation the way they feel towards one another and the jokes! I just simply fell in love with this story!
Amazing! Its the best talk and relationships between boys and girls! I just I'm in love with every detail and word! And sensation the way they feel towards one another and the jokes! I just simply fell in love with this story!
8/6/2015 c1 Guest
Great job!
Great job!
4/6/2015 c1 TheGreenRaven
Hehe, it was a little embarrasing for me at the beginning (especially the thing about the "fourteen inch long tongue"), but it was really amazing, and I definitely loved the end :) I'm checking your other stories right away.
Hehe, it was a little embarrasing for me at the beginning (especially the thing about the "fourteen inch long tongue"), but it was really amazing, and I definitely loved the end :) I'm checking your other stories right away.
2/10/2015 c1 bbrae dpsam
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwewewwwwwwwwwww
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwewewwwwwwwwwww
1/22/2015 c1 bbrae dpsam
*blushing red and pink *:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
*smiling crazily *:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
*blushing red and pink *:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
*smiling crazily *:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
12/8/2014 c1
40Concolor44
Very logical, very realistic issues they have to deal with.
In the first episode, Star flipped a BUS into the air with one foot and then hurled it at the others. Knowing her strength level, I would be VERY cautious about being in a full embrace with her while she was in the throes of climax. "Back-breaker" is where it would START.
Also ... WHAT shifting difficulties? Is that something Gar developed over time? He certainly had no such issue during the show. Or have I missed that in an earlier story of yours?

Very logical, very realistic issues they have to deal with.
In the first episode, Star flipped a BUS into the air with one foot and then hurled it at the others. Knowing her strength level, I would be VERY cautious about being in a full embrace with her while she was in the throes of climax. "Back-breaker" is where it would START.
Also ... WHAT shifting difficulties? Is that something Gar developed over time? He certainly had no such issue during the show. Or have I missed that in an earlier story of yours?
7/17/2014 c1
9yhighon
I love how Garfield blushes purple. Its not like that in the show where he just blushes red. Also the part where he said "it's already awkward enough when I change in my sleep and Raven wakes up hugging a cheetah or leopard." I was laughing. That was funny. Anyway, good story!

I love how Garfield blushes purple. Its not like that in the show where he just blushes red. Also the part where he said "it's already awkward enough when I change in my sleep and Raven wakes up hugging a cheetah or leopard." I was laughing. That was funny. Anyway, good story!
5/31/2014 c1
8azarathianscribbles
Wow! It's nice to read a story that goes into the depth of Nightwing and BB's friendship. I loved it!

Wow! It's nice to read a story that goes into the depth of Nightwing and BB's friendship. I loved it!