for rose and dimitri first time8/27/2016 c3 Guest
Very good fanfiction, pls do more!
Very good fanfiction, pls do more!
61/23/2015 c1 No name
Can you write another chapter when Jill and Adrian fall in love?
Can you write another chapter when Jill and Adrian fall in love?
9/23/2013 c2 Guest
Your grammar needs some work; you have some run on sentences. I don't really know; I feel like you didn't really portray Rose and Dimitri's characters very well. They don't seem like that at all in the book.
Your grammar needs some work; you have some run on sentences. I don't really know; I feel like you didn't really portray Rose and Dimitri's characters very well. They don't seem like that at all in the book.
2/17/2013 c4 Guest
Can you write another chapter with spanking?(:
Can you write another chapter with spanking?(:
2/17/2013 c2 Guest
Spanked? Whoa, definitely probably my favorite part!
Spanked? Whoa, definitely probably my favorite part!
12/4/2011 c4 no name
Story is Great! Update soon.
Story is Great! Update soon.
9/23/2011 c3 JohnnyBIsabella4eva
O_o my virgin eyes! Lol jkjk. But really that was intense... Just wow... I feel dirty after reading that first chapter... After that tho it was more of love making and not hot porn lol!
O_o my virgin eyes! Lol jkjk. But really that was intense... Just wow... I feel dirty after reading that first chapter... After that tho it was more of love making and not hot porn lol!