for The Past Never Dies As Memories Do3/9/2019 c6 Guest
love it
love it
2/16/2016 c2 sarahgri99
"Dean flashed a smile that could make angels fall. Oh wait one did."
When I read that my hand went to my mouth to keep myself from screaming cuz I'm on my way to school with my dad sooo thanks for almost giving me an aneurism.
This is super great so far! Onto the next chapter!
"Dean flashed a smile that could make angels fall. Oh wait one did."
When I read that my hand went to my mouth to keep myself from screaming cuz I'm on my way to school with my dad sooo thanks for almost giving me an aneurism.
This is super great so far! Onto the next chapter!
7/30/2014 c4 Moriarty
Azel? Do you mean Azazel?
Azel? Do you mean Azazel?
7/11/2013 c6 dragonlover44
Please finish this story! It seems to be on hiatus, but I'd love to read the rest. You see, you left on a cliff hanger and I want to know what happens to Sam and Dean; and if Spencer gets fired or charged and an accessory or something since he clearly knows that Sam and Dean are wanted criminals.
dragonlover44
Please finish this story! It seems to be on hiatus, but I'd love to read the rest. You see, you left on a cliff hanger and I want to know what happens to Sam and Dean; and if Spencer gets fired or charged and an accessory or something since he clearly knows that Sam and Dean are wanted criminals.
dragonlover44
10/26/2012 c6 animelvr16
i really like this story and i can't wait to read and find out what happens next so please post another chaper soon.
i really like this story and i can't wait to read and find out what happens next so please post another chaper soon.
2/5/2012 c6 
80Madd Aless
Good job so far not sure where you're headed but I'm willing to be a beta if you really want one. I've seen the first season and most of the current season of CM and a few random episodes not to familiar with Rossi or Nicki but my English is decent
80Madd AlessGood job so far not sure where you're headed but I'm willing to be a beta if you really want one. I've seen the first season and most of the current season of CM and a few random episodes not to familiar with Rossi or Nicki but my English is decent
1/6/2012 c6 loussi
I love stories where Reid knows the brother and is friend with them and thank you for making Garcia a part of this too:)
I love stories where Reid knows the brother and is friend with them and thank you for making Garcia a part of this too:)
1/1/2012 c6 winka
OH great story, more please soon !
OH great story, more please soon !
11/25/2011 c5 1notreallyme2
Ok. Some typos, "The hospital as ordinary". I think you meant "was" not "as".
There are a bunch of others like that. Probably typing too fast and all the
keystrokes aren't being picked up. Also, spellchecker won't catch them all
because "as" is a valid word. Maybe the grammar check would pick it up?
Anyway, I can read around that, and am enjoying the story. I like CM and SPN
xovers. So I will continue to read this story.
Thanks for sharing your words with us!
1notreallyme2Ok. Some typos, "The hospital as ordinary". I think you meant "was" not "as".
There are a bunch of others like that. Probably typing too fast and all the
keystrokes aren't being picked up. Also, spellchecker won't catch them all
because "as" is a valid word. Maybe the grammar check would pick it up?
Anyway, I can read around that, and am enjoying the story. I like CM and SPN
xovers. So I will continue to read this story.
Thanks for sharing your words with us!
11/6/2011 c5 meichenko
The story is interesting but I can't read it anymore. You seriously need a beta reader. Latter and later. Reid and Read. There are also other words that are just misspelled turning on your spell check and grammar check would help you quite a bit.
The story is interesting but I can't read it anymore. You seriously need a beta reader. Latter and later. Reid and Read. There are also other words that are just misspelled turning on your spell check and grammar check would help you quite a bit.
10/19/2011 c4 29A Smiling Cat
Okay, so, you asked for advice ... Keep in mind that if I didn't like the story, I wouldn't read id and wouldn't review it.
I think you should re-read yourself or using a bêta before posting. I'm not sure if it's the grammar (English is not my first language) but there's something amiss with the way you turn your phrases. I'm sorry I can't be more specific. I don't know you personnally, so maybe it's not and it's a style, but it just screams "beginner" (well, I'm pretty sure my first works won't be winning any awards (and neither will my later ones, but not the point)) to me.
Then, the flashbacks ... Ok, I'm not so averse to the idea than some of my friends, but ... too much. I'd rather read memories, little by little. You can do subtle, your readers are not stupid. On the other hand, I'm not fond of you changing PoV every three lines or so. Yes, I know the story takes place at different locations, but you can just follow Spencer (since he seems to be the link) and put some more information about Morgan and the team and/or the Winchesters at the beginning and the end of the story.
But as I said, I really like the crossover idea, and Reid being kinda forced into acting like a hunter, and not just being the "kid".
I know I wrote some subjective advice. But in my opinion, you should know what your readers think. Feel free to ignore part(s) of what I said, it may not be how you pictured your story. You can PM me if you want to discuss about what I wrote, and/or reply to the review.
Best wishes for what comes next,
Cat :-)
29A Smiling CatOkay, so, you asked for advice ... Keep in mind that if I didn't like the story, I wouldn't read id and wouldn't review it.
I think you should re-read yourself or using a bêta before posting. I'm not sure if it's the grammar (English is not my first language) but there's something amiss with the way you turn your phrases. I'm sorry I can't be more specific. I don't know you personnally, so maybe it's not and it's a style, but it just screams "beginner" (well, I'm pretty sure my first works won't be winning any awards (and neither will my later ones, but not the point)) to me.
Then, the flashbacks ... Ok, I'm not so averse to the idea than some of my friends, but ... too much. I'd rather read memories, little by little. You can do subtle, your readers are not stupid. On the other hand, I'm not fond of you changing PoV every three lines or so. Yes, I know the story takes place at different locations, but you can just follow Spencer (since he seems to be the link) and put some more information about Morgan and the team and/or the Winchesters at the beginning and the end of the story.
But as I said, I really like the crossover idea, and Reid being kinda forced into acting like a hunter, and not just being the "kid".
I know I wrote some subjective advice. But in my opinion, you should know what your readers think. Feel free to ignore part(s) of what I said, it may not be how you pictured your story. You can PM me if you want to discuss about what I wrote, and/or reply to the review.
Best wishes for what comes next,
Cat :-)