5/29/2013 c5 James Birdsong
Excellent two chapters
Excellent two chapters
5/12/2013 c5 8hotkillerz
soooo its been 3 months since u updated, just wondering if u are going to update anytime soon.
soooo its been 3 months since u updated, just wondering if u are going to update anytime soon.
2/28/2013 c5 56Kyorinrin
FINALLY! A CHAPTER!
I loved it! Can't wait for more!
The mock-funeral was so touching!
FINALLY! A CHAPTER!
I loved it! Can't wait for more!
The mock-funeral was so touching!
2/28/2013 c5 daisyo1
I like the pacing but there are parts I have to reread to understand what you mean. Overall I love the story though and look forward to an update.
I like the pacing but there are parts I have to reread to understand what you mean. Overall I love the story though and look forward to an update.
5/5/2012 c4 2IceFantom
Liking the story still. :) I'd like to see more of your story sooner, but please, do it on your own time. :) It was a little confusing trying to understand what you were trying to write sometimes. I had to reread some parts several times before I got what was going on. Other than that, it's golden. :D
Liking the story still. :) I'd like to see more of your story sooner, but please, do it on your own time. :) It was a little confusing trying to understand what you were trying to write sometimes. I had to reread some parts several times before I got what was going on. Other than that, it's golden. :D
5/5/2012 c4 yuuki yami
wahhh~ thank you thank you thank you! I'm so happy that you decided to continue!please update soon! i love this story!and if you abandon it then say so so I wont wait anymore...update soon!
wahhh~ thank you thank you thank you! I'm so happy that you decided to continue!please update soon! i love this story!and if you abandon it then say so so I wont wait anymore...update soon!
3/25/2012 c3 2IceFantom
Awesome story so far! I don't really have anything to say bad about it so far other than the lengthy chapters. But you know, the story does correspond to the chapter titles very well. I guess it's just taste. lol xD
I like how you kept the Silver Millennium civilizations alive and only the Moon destroyed. It is true that they didn't say anything about the other planets. I also like how you treat each planet as if they were different countries with their own unique language, culture, personalities, and specialties with the Moon as the supremacy like a country with it's different ethnic groups and accents (am I contradicting myself? lol). Good job! Hope you'll update soon! :)
Awesome story so far! I don't really have anything to say bad about it so far other than the lengthy chapters. But you know, the story does correspond to the chapter titles very well. I guess it's just taste. lol xD
I like how you kept the Silver Millennium civilizations alive and only the Moon destroyed. It is true that they didn't say anything about the other planets. I also like how you treat each planet as if they were different countries with their own unique language, culture, personalities, and specialties with the Moon as the supremacy like a country with it's different ethnic groups and accents (am I contradicting myself? lol). Good job! Hope you'll update soon! :)
3/15/2012 c3 2moonworld
I love your story so far. To imagine that civilizations of the Silver Millenium era are still alive is an original and very good idea. It's the first fic I've read with this postulate and I find it very interesting.
I love the ring scene, very well written. Hope you'll update soon! :)
I love your story so far. To imagine that civilizations of the Silver Millenium era are still alive is an original and very good idea. It's the first fic I've read with this postulate and I find it very interesting.
I love the ring scene, very well written. Hope you'll update soon! :)